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Re: Re: Kabu, thanks!

posted by Kabu on January 24, 2014 at 5:52 PM | link to this | reply

Re: CCT,

Thanks, Mr Poet! Sometimes, if I am writing free or blank verse, to get the rhythms right, I imagine hearing Garrison Keillor read them aloud.  He has such an easy stride through a poem, and his particular voice charms me! Do you get "Prairie Home Companion" on your English radios? 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BahQFqJbICg

This is a segment of one show.

This one is a speaking engagement I find engaging--I can put this sort of thing on, and putter around the house doing things.

posted by Ciel on January 24, 2014 at 9:31 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Pat,

posted by Ciel on January 24, 2014 at 8:16 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Naut,

Thanks, I'm glad you like them! 

posted by Ciel on January 24, 2014 at 8:14 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu, thanks!

You are such a sweetheart!

posted by Ciel on January 24, 2014 at 8:13 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Thanks,TAPS,

I know you know what it's like... how positively special are the children who are born with such limitation, yet so capable of the greatest love and sweetness. I didn't realize until your comment yesterday, in your blog, that Phil has the mental age of ~2.  Lucky he has you and his dad, though perhaps luck doesn't come into it, any more than coincidence.

posted by Ciel on January 24, 2014 at 8:13 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Pat,

This neighbor sounds like a wonderful subject for you to write about at length!

posted by Ciel on January 24, 2014 at 8:04 AM | link to this | reply

Yes you write nice poems Ciel. I like the rhymed one better personally. Although free verse is somewhat harder to write,although better if one cannot deal with the other. Both very nice though, fancy knowing a poetess.

 

posted by C_C_T on January 24, 2014 at 7:55 AM | link to this | reply

I had to come back and read these again. I love them.

posted by Pat_B on January 24, 2014 at 3:43 AM | link to this | reply

Ciel

These really touched me...

posted by Nautikos on January 23, 2014 at 8:43 PM | link to this | reply

These are just fabulous, I am in awe...you beautiful person to write such wonderful words as these.

posted by Kabu on January 23, 2014 at 6:43 PM | link to this | reply

What beautiful, meaningful poems.  Such talent you have, hidden in that loving heart of yours.  Thank you for sharing them.

posted by TAPS. on January 23, 2014 at 4:43 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful. Both of them...

We had a neighbor with Down Syndome, brilliant at pantomime. His grandpa was a baseball scout and the sport was HUGE in the family, so R.A. could hit, run, slide, pitch, catch and cheer, without having a bat or a ball. All the neighbor kids treated him just like everyone else, one of the gang. He taught us a lot.

posted by Pat_B on January 23, 2014 at 4:26 PM | link to this | reply