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This strikes me as a house-cleaning of sorts, an attempt at purifying the mind and the soul! Of course, that's always a very difficult undertaking...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 9, 2013 at 11:26 AM
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Very experienced with frying pans oil cans and bed pans Lion.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 9, 2013 at 7:29 AM
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This is very cleverly done, I am impressed
posted by
lionreign
on January 9, 2013 at 3:47 AM
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Hm, a bit unsavoury Simone, but one can get used to most things. Having done a bit of amateur nursing as I am sure you have, one soon adjusts to most occasions and makes light of them.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 9, 2013 at 12:22 AM
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Well I don't profess to be an intellectual Taps. I can work a washing machine though.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 9, 2013 at 12:18 AM
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Re: I got caught up in the metaphor,
The nurses deserve their wage Pat. If only we had been designed better.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 9, 2013 at 12:15 AM
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Re: SAm
Yes Sam we all know that hurt, or even the little bit of one. Hope he smiles.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 9, 2013 at 12:14 AM
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I have had several of those...metaphorically speaking of course.
posted by
UtahJay
on January 9, 2013 at 12:13 AM
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Re:Kabu
Not really Kabu, just kick them out of sight these days. Going to wash a greenhouse out now. Little bear came from you know who last year.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 9, 2013 at 12:11 AM
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Re: C.C.
Yes right Justi, truthfully I feel tired most bedtimes. Thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on January 9, 2013 at 12:07 AM
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C.C.
Tell the memories you are done with them and you are going to sleep soundly and be very rested in the morning. You just have such a creative mind it dislikes to shut down for sleep. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on January 8, 2013 at 11:56 PM
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Are you being pursued by some bad memories dear CC?
I don't think that the enema idea is a good one ...never knew anyone enjoy any of the many that Nurse Kabu administered.
...Cheer up luv...I am sure you gave
'em all a good time.
posted by
Kabu
on January 8, 2013 at 3:53 PM
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This one hit home for me! I have been talking with a friend of Jes' who recently got dumped by his girlfriend! He's so sad but I plan to share this line from your wonderful poem:
It would be nice to continue in this theme, but in real life, a good time
dies and a bad time, recovers.
I especially liked the use of theme, gives it a universal flavor! Like I've heard if one writes they will be quoted, but in this case I may or may not keep it anonymous! LOL! I will let you know! I think it might help him! sam 
posted by
sam444
on January 8, 2013 at 3:45 PM
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I got caught up in the metaphor,
bedpans and nurses, etc. It's not a pretty image, and I cannot think it better. I will try to think on the good things.
posted by
Pat_B
on January 8, 2013 at 12:40 PM
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It took me a couple of readings to see how well done this is.
On the first reading, I think my mind was more focused on the laundry I need to remove from the dryer. Second reading, I totally forgot about the laundry.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 8, 2013 at 11:09 AM
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Interesting thought... that one of flushing out bad memories as if they were the unmentionables we get rid of with enemas loll Imagine how convenient that would be... Make an appointment, get connected to the little hose and presto! all bad thoughts and lingering annoying memories are gone into the bucket. An amazing concept! :-) Great poem CC xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 8, 2013 at 10:18 AM
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