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This was great. So well written :-) Bravo! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 6, 2013 at 6:31 PM
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PatB
An interesting read, well written, even if I don't believe in heaven and hell my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 6, 2013 at 4:55 PM
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A fascinating read, Pat_B. You're making the abnormal seem so normal. Definitely keep writing!!
posted by
adnohr
on January 6, 2013 at 2:44 PM
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Pat
I would have never thought I'd enjoy a conversation in Heaven (well, the outer edges of it anyway, though I've been through the Inferno, LOL), but I do...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 6, 2013 at 1:40 PM
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So fun to read. You have such an imagination, and so much ability to put it into writing.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 6, 2013 at 1:25 PM
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Each excerpt is a gem ..this one is something special. Well done oh
talented one, write on.
posted by
Kabu
on January 6, 2013 at 11:53 AM
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No it is not easy to get redemption, well it should not be. One should have to really earn a place in the comfort zone. I suppose it depends how the author feels.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 6, 2013 at 11:19 AM
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I like the message between the lines
that a kid that starts sweet can turn out to be barely a selfish jackass, if that's what his dad modeled.
"Children learn what they live..."
posted by
Ciel
on January 6, 2013 at 10:22 AM
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Riveting :-) I don't read you often enough... I got to catch up with past posts but this one was excellent xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 6, 2013 at 9:25 AM
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