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Go Wiley! Takin care of your woman (and cat). Kidding aside Kabu, nice story, fun read.

posted by tamijo on July 17, 2012 at 4:57 PM | link to this | reply

Christopher called today and he is to wed on July 27, 2013. Here is a link to the place if you would like to take a look: Lost Lake Woods! It's a beautiful place! Your sam 

posted by sam444 on July 15, 2012 at 7:16 PM | link to this | reply

I have a good feeling this would all end up well! I liked the settlement and the take charge by Wiley in the story! Moral: Don't mess with a man who has PTSD, it won't bode well! LOL! Great one, I really like your storytelling, too! I like the Mr. Jack title in the end as well! It could be call Encounter with Mr. Jack as a first story because this truly lends itself to a sequel very nicely as well! Your sam 

posted by sam444 on July 15, 2012 at 6:56 PM | link to this | reply

It was one wild roller coaster wide with lots of twists and turns. I enjoyed every step along the way.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 15, 2012 at 9:32 AM | link to this | reply

wiley to the rescue once again

posted by Lanetay on July 15, 2012 at 8:37 AM | link to this | reply

Perfect ending!

As for Jack -- I hope his nose stays out of joint for a decade or two!

posted by Pat_B on July 15, 2012 at 5:35 AM | link to this | reply

LOL - great ending!! And as Justi commented - another story is now required!!

posted by adnohr on July 15, 2012 at 1:51 AM | link to this | reply

You are a card Kabu 25 million, I think you will have to be put in prison for extortion, but now I come to think of it, you are a nice looking bit of tackle all said and done, I could put Wiley in A Harem and you could enjoy the luxury of my London apartment and if the worst came to the worst, well I know a taxidermist. Your Wiley throws a good punch and coiuld do with a little pampering, If this turns your wheel, you have two days to decide.   signed    Paula Jack's assistant in psychology.    

posted by C_C_T on July 15, 2012 at 12:46 AM | link to this | reply

Wiley got just right with Jack. It can be  Horrible how people will let little pretenders do terrible things because of their perceptions of them.  Good moral to this story.   

posted by mariss9 on July 14, 2012 at 9:53 PM | link to this | reply

Kabuiepie-;)

Terrific conclusion darlin' now with all that money,let's go get a chocolate covered soft ice cream at DQ. Great wrtiting creativity love.

posted by WileyJohn on July 14, 2012 at 8:52 PM | link to this | reply

Great end .

posted by afzal50 on July 14, 2012 at 8:45 PM | link to this | reply

I really do like Wiley's way of righting wrongs. Some people have to be shown. You go Wiley. I hope you will keep you little house in Northern Camelot. I can't see you happy in a $25,000,000 house with a full staff of servants. It would be no fun, none. Okay it is time to begin another story. That was absolutely great.

posted by Justi on July 14, 2012 at 8:38 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu

þ Or else Mr. Graysome would live with gnomes. But he already does. What’s so unusual? Excellent love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on July 14, 2012 at 6:39 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu

25 mill each plus 5 for the kitty is a nice alternative to being liquified, LOL! I'd take a small chunk of hardware in my bum for that anytime - you wouldn't by any chance have Jack's phone number, would you?

posted by Nautikos on July 14, 2012 at 6:02 PM | link to this | reply

Wow, way to go on, Dear Kabu & Loving family!

Fantastic conclusion; I was worried maybe you and WileyFriend would be confined to playpens..:)  I love it when the good guys win and win Big!

posted by Katray2 on July 14, 2012 at 4:31 PM | link to this | reply