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I like how you keep it suspenseful but not overbearing! And, a title came to mind~ Immortally Duped but I am not sold on it at this point! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 12, 2012 at 12:51 AM
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Crikey I missed this episode, but I am raring to follow.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 10, 2012 at 11:53 PM
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You can't stop there!!! Cliff hangers are mean!!!! :D
posted by
lionreign
on July 10, 2012 at 3:57 AM
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Oh dear Kabu...Do save Mr Graysome.
posted by
UtahJay
on July 9, 2012 at 11:55 PM
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Honey how did our Dixie Mafia get all the way to North Camelot? Ask them if they know any of your relatives down South they will back off?
posted by
Justi
on July 9, 2012 at 10:15 PM
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Hey Kabu, I knew what you meant when I read your comment! The man is not blocked and I told him as much in a comment I left at his blog! Don't let him upset you because people like him are not worth it! As writers we can never please anyone so why bother but to take the verbal garbage is not to my liking so I am over it! Now I will be back tomorrow with my comment on your story because I want to read it all from the beginning anyway as I have been thinking all day on and off regarding a title and nothing has come to my mind that I like so far! Thanks for your response to that dude! You should check out my comment though! I like the part about the emoticon! LOL! sam 
posted by
sam444
on July 9, 2012 at 9:28 PM
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I like the silence .......
posted by
afzal50
on July 9, 2012 at 8:20 PM
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Kabuiepie-;)
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 9, 2012 at 7:31 PM
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Kabuiepie-;)
Thanks a bunch eh? LIke I started reading and my past of not nice people chasing me came right back. Lordy love. Now I can't wait to get to where this is going love.
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 9, 2012 at 7:29 PM
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Bravo Kabu! Can't wait for the next installment.
posted by
tamijo
on July 9, 2012 at 6:32 PM
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Oh yes - am loving this!!
posted by
adnohr
on July 9, 2012 at 11:53 AM
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Hmm, can't think of anything good enough to go with the drama!
This is fantastic writing, Dear Kabu; a cliff hanger! More please..:) 
posted by
Katray2
on July 9, 2012 at 9:15 AM
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Guns sure do bring a whole lot of excitement with them.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 9, 2012 at 9:11 AM
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I love your imagination! Tell us more, please. 
posted by
Butterfly-1950
on July 9, 2012 at 8:10 AM
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Kabu
Very nasty situation, that. And to the Cayman Islands? That's really ominous - after all, the got caimans there, and caimans need to be fed, and not with broccoli...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 9, 2012 at 7:48 AM
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dont argue with them it could be worse you could have to go to New York instead
posted by
Lanetay
on July 9, 2012 at 7:42 AM
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Oh, I like the role Mr. Greysome is playing here.
Too bad you can't work something about nine lives into the title -- since you're actually living so many human lifetimes -- maybe some genetic material from your fierce feline would be involved. As for the gunsels - and your visit to the Caymans -- more please.
posted by
Pat_B
on July 9, 2012 at 7:37 AM
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