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Re: Re.kabu Oh CC...i am too delicate to even think of such a thing!

and if you believe that I have a bridge to sell you. Shaped like a coathanger so she be!!

posted by Kabu on May 4, 2012 at 8:41 PM | link to this | reply

Amazing poetry!

posted by BrightIrish on May 4, 2012 at 11:21 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful

posted by DKosef on May 4, 2012 at 8:44 AM | link to this | reply

Re: I feel another place and time in your poems,

I know what you mean PAT , yes sleep like many things seem more desirable than the real consquence, shall we think of one? You go first,

posted by C_C_T on May 4, 2012 at 7:08 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Jay

WEll it is still raining here have you really got a 14 acre field?

posted by C_C_T on May 4, 2012 at 6:59 AM | link to this | reply

Re Straightforward

Sadly when ardour fades cold feet appear , SF, If you don't beleive me ask your Mum,

posted by C_C_T on May 4, 2012 at 6:56 AM | link to this | reply

I feel another place and time in your poems,

which take me away from the here and now. I like the sentiment of morning sunshine and the need to sleep just a moment longer. perchance...

posted by Pat_B on May 4, 2012 at 5:05 AM | link to this | reply

I certainly wish the weather would make her mind up, I have planting to do and a 14 acre field to bail. Your touch for poetry is still strong CCT.

posted by UtahJay on May 4, 2012 at 1:06 AM | link to this | reply

I don't know if there are some stereotypes here, but it did seem so real to

me.....well captured reality sort of.

posted by Straightforward on May 4, 2012 at 12:11 AM | link to this | reply

ReFS:

FS you are quite  observant don't forget to use your suncream this weekend

posted by C_C_T on May 3, 2012 at 11:34 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Justi

Thank you Justi in the show world that is a feature of the flowers, I don't know what it is particular to this species, I know they originated in mountainous regions, but no one seems to know why this patina is so prominent

posted by C_C_T on May 3, 2012 at 11:29 PM | link to this | reply

Re.kabu

Kabu can you imagine the old man wanting to stick his cold feet inside her nighty.

posted by C_C_T on May 3, 2012 at 11:25 PM | link to this | reply

Re: SAM

HI Sam I am okay really apart from muscular pains, which I have brought on myself. Yes well nothing is easy Sam, there are always side-effects but I suppose you've got to give it a good trial, sometimes it is a job to remember past agony until one has it again.

posted by C_C_T on May 3, 2012 at 11:21 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Chiff.Chaff.

I fear you have been working hard Wiley, I never fancied those chainsaws, I always thought they seem dangerous, I am trying to get my water pump fixed so that I can pump the rainwater down to the bottom of the garden as carrying buckets becomes a bit arduous,

posted by C_C_T on May 3, 2012 at 11:17 PM | link to this | reply

Re: marrise

Indeed marrise but it felt very cold here here yesterday danp cold, thank you

posted by C_C_T on May 3, 2012 at 11:13 PM | link to this | reply

Re: BILL

Yes Bill we can always do with more of that

posted by C_C_T on May 3, 2012 at 11:10 PM | link to this | reply

CCT

 Sleep makes winter look good sir. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on May 3, 2012 at 10:41 PM | link to this | reply

 Spring is a time of renewal and the frost fading away as it gets warmer.

posted by mariss9 on May 3, 2012 at 9:37 PM | link to this | reply

Chiff.Chaff.

Now I have the chills, outside all day in the sort of dampness that would make my lady tell me to turn the heat on.  I couldn't have said it as well though and the second poem didn't seem to give you joy, The flowers are always a joy my friend.

posted by WileyJohn on May 3, 2012 at 7:06 PM | link to this | reply

In the first poem I could relate to the feeling of being warm and not wanting to be interrupted only drift quietly into slumber! The second I thought of waiting for a phone to ring with a warm and friendly friend or lover or whatever to call but it never seems to happen when one needs it most!

I have been having a time of it with the adjustment to this medication regime but it does improve every day! It's hard to stay on task but I am managing to get some reading done today and that feels good! How are things going for you these days? sam 

posted by sam444 on May 3, 2012 at 5:41 PM | link to this | reply

i love that first poem. She is so practical i just burst out laughing.

Great post all around.

posted by Kabu on May 3, 2012 at 5:11 PM | link to this | reply

Those flowers are also wonderful. They set the tone for both the writings. It looks like sprinking of snow on them.

posted by Justi on May 3, 2012 at 11:46 AM | link to this | reply

Your first poem fits well with this time of the year...The images in the second flow along nicely.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 3, 2012 at 11:00 AM | link to this | reply