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Re: Riveting...

Thank you, Food! Yes, it is amazing..

posted by Katray2 on March 22, 2012 at 8:05 PM | link to this | reply

Riveting...

Draws one in quickly. And isn't it odd how a story takes on a life of its own?

posted by food4thought on March 22, 2012 at 7:29 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Katray2

Well said, Bill - Thank you!

posted by Katray2 on March 22, 2012 at 7:09 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Katray2 - yes I did finish it

That is great, Gomedome! In my h.o. writers never really consider any of their works "finished" but sounds as if you are moving on toward your goals. Kudos.

posted by Katray2 on March 22, 2012 at 7:08 AM | link to this | reply

Katray2

Y The characters have their defenses. They push the story forward against an antagonist, that is war love.  BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on March 21, 2012 at 10:22 PM | link to this | reply

Katray2 - yes I did finish it

By saying I have finished it I am actually saying that I have a complete version of the story in need of more polishing. Part of my reason for coming back to Blogit is an attempt to rekindle my own interest in that work and a few other projects that are not yet complete.

posted by gomedome on March 21, 2012 at 8:52 PM | link to this | reply

Re: I just have to agree with our Wiley here!

Thank you, Dear Kabu!

posted by Katray2 on March 21, 2012 at 8:31 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Katray 2

Thanks so much, WileyFriend.

posted by Katray2 on March 21, 2012 at 8:31 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Katray2 - this project sounds very interesting

Yes, Gomedome, the scenes unfurl before my eyes and I do my best to capture and do them justice through my words. Thank you for your interest. I remember that you had a good story going awhile back here on Blogit. Did you finish it?

posted by Katray2 on March 21, 2012 at 8:30 PM | link to this | reply

I just have to agree with our Wiley here!

posted by Kabu on March 21, 2012 at 8:25 PM | link to this | reply

Katray 2

This is building up into a dandy story luv, well written and captures my imagination.

posted by WileyJohn on March 21, 2012 at 7:14 PM | link to this | reply

Katray2 - this project sounds very interesting

Are you finding that plotlines are unfolding as if they are writing themselves? That has been my experience when I feel inspired as it appears that you have been here.

posted by gomedome on March 21, 2012 at 5:54 PM | link to this | reply

Just did grammar clean-up on the excerpt..:) Thank you so much, FSI,

Troosha, Sam and CCT!

posted by Katray2 on March 21, 2012 at 2:07 PM | link to this | reply

So life like Ray, it really stirs one's emotions  

posted by C_C_T on March 21, 2012 at 12:27 PM | link to this | reply

You paint extremely strong and profound images! A riveting read. 

posted by Troosha on March 21, 2012 at 12:19 PM | link to this | reply

I think this was profound and I would be highly interested to read more! So, it is a good tease as it were to spike the interest! sam 

posted by sam444 on March 21, 2012 at 11:32 AM | link to this | reply

This has piqued my interest. I like your description style.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 21, 2012 at 9:46 AM | link to this | reply

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