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You should post more of your poetry.
You are quite good at it.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 29, 2012 at 11:01 AM
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Meri pyaas ka koi hisab nahin,teri mast nazar ka jawab nahin.....unhi mast nazar se pilaye ja phir saamne jaam rahe na rahe......your intense poem reminds me of these lines of a lovely old bollywood number.
posted by
shamasehar
on February 21, 2012 at 5:35 AM
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You use powerful images to describe the state of the heart.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 18, 2012 at 12:20 PM
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Great peace is derived through these words! It is a wonderful testament in its own right, too! To this poem I say kudos, and of course touche my Bro! Shelly 
posted by
sam444
on February 18, 2012 at 12:14 PM
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It is a terrible emptiness when we somehow shut our higher power from
reaching us. that feeling is of parched and cracking earth, loneliness abandonment.
posted by
Kabu
on February 17, 2012 at 9:29 PM
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