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I have used personification in poetry and it seems to bring the poem to life and a heightened sense of awareness permeates the poem as it did with the doll reference! It just feels like a whole dimension is created which give rise to deeper interpretation! You did a fine job of portraying the essence of this cited poem as well! I like how the reader and the critic can discern the meaning and enhance the meaning, too! Shelly 

posted by sam444 on November 15, 2011 at 1:38 AM | link to this | reply

Kabu

You are really too kind and always so loving towards almost, why almost, to each of my writes, and this is so very encouraging. I thank you from the bottom of my heart.

posted by anib on November 13, 2011 at 6:23 AM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS

Thank you so very much, ma'am, and I am glad that you could relate the poem, especially it's rendering in Spanish. I am always fascinated as to what is the style of those who win Nobel prizes, and I must admit that I got entangled with the sudden changes in the imagery which upon contemplation, I found intimately organic. 

posted by anib on November 13, 2011 at 6:19 AM | link to this | reply

you really are a remarkable writer you make a poem so clear for me with

your essay so that at last I can understand. Thank you our brilliant friend.

posted by Kabu on November 12, 2011 at 9:18 AM | link to this | reply

Of course, after reading this post, I followed the link to read the poem.  How could I not?  I love the way you write about others' writings.  I enjoyed reading it first in Español.  I don't use it very much these days and my speaking and reading of it has become stale.  But there is such a freshness in this poem, and it/you definitely bring back memories of the times I have been in the wonderful pine forests of the Pacific Northwest near the coast and listening to the foghorns in the distance.

posted by TAPS. on November 12, 2011 at 6:50 AM | link to this | reply