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Go with your mind and soul to your evaluation. And then you still have both and your family love. BC-A Bill”s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on November 11, 2011 at 9:12 AM
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Excellently stated, Dear Sam! Thank you...
posted by
Raye09
on November 11, 2011 at 6:15 AM
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It is a tough world we live in and the opinions are varying but the poor are always left behind or snubbed it seems! The true test of life for me is how much we do for those who are less fortunate than we are! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 10, 2011 at 9:17 PM
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Re: Much appreciated, FSI! Something is wrong with the comment box...
posted by
Raye09
on November 10, 2011 at 11:28 AM
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Re: Raye...
Thank you so much, Food! 
posted by
Raye09
on November 10, 2011 at 11:27 AM
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Thank you, CC. I placed the piece here too 'cause it looks like a poem..:) 
posted by
Raye09
on November 10, 2011 at 11:26 AM
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You express your feelings so well about the world that we live in.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 10, 2011 at 10:22 AM
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Raye...
Great wordsmanship, meanings swimming in a pool of cognisance.
posted by
food4thought
on November 10, 2011 at 8:39 AM
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You can sure rattle them off Raye, There is so much to agree to here.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 10, 2011 at 7:40 AM
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Re: maybe it is time for a history lesson....people will grumble along
Well said, Dear Kabu! Yes they do, though I pray it will not come to that. Thank you..
posted by
Raye09
on November 10, 2011 at 7:09 AM
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maybe it is time for a history lesson....people will grumble along
but happily if they have the basic rights of life....but when the wealthy say if they can't affoed bread, let them eat cake....revolution changes society.
posted by
Kabu
on November 10, 2011 at 7:02 AM
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Re: There's a real originality about your language in this poem -
Much appreciated, Bob..
posted by
Raye09
on November 10, 2011 at 5:46 AM
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Exactly right, Dear Shobana. Greed sanctioned by God, so they say..
Thank you.
posted by
Raye09
on November 10, 2011 at 5:46 AM
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Re: Raye09
And in man-made religion. Thank you, Bill.
posted by
Raye09
on November 10, 2011 at 5:45 AM
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There's a real originality about your language in this poem -
they, they, they/a shadow fallen wrong - it was a pleasure to hear your feelings expressed so strikingly. I share your concerns. - Bob
posted by
2902
on November 10, 2011 at 12:37 AM
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I guess greed is much to be blamed for this malady.
posted by
shobana
on November 9, 2011 at 11:51 PM
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Raye09
UYThat’s in worship. However when they leave there’s a lot of world that needs their love and peace love.BC-A Bill”s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on November 9, 2011 at 10:07 PM
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