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You have a sure and elegant step on the tight rope of poetry. 

posted by CUPLETS on April 29, 2011 at 6:24 PM | link to this | reply

I can see that I need to add this blog of yours to my favorites. 

posted by TAPS. on April 27, 2011 at 9:26 PM | link to this | reply

N A nice way to follow through melancholy. Excellent. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on April 27, 2011 at 8:42 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Gerontian, you're going to rekindle my desire to write the odd sonnet.:)
He he, I often feel that my sonnets are quite odd.  But support from a writer like yourself is a tonic.  Thank you.

posted by Gerontian on April 27, 2011 at 2:17 PM | link to this | reply

Re: sonnets
Thanks, UtahJay.  I love to read sonnets too.  I do not always choose to write in this form, but I enjoy the process and the challenge. Paradoxically, I find the form opens up ideas, that is, when I am really into the subject. I will try to share my thoughts and ideas about them in my journal.  Your encouragement means a lot.

posted by Gerontian on April 27, 2011 at 2:15 PM | link to this | reply

Re:
Thanks for the encouragement and the welcome, sam.  I like the challenges a sonnet presents.  Most of mine don't "work," really, but the process feels like half the fun.  I am never quite sure about mine, so your comments are a very welcome support.

posted by Gerontian on April 27, 2011 at 2:09 PM | link to this | reply

Gerontian, you're going to rekindle my desire to write the odd sonnet.:)
This was great..very vivid imagery....

posted by Rumor on April 27, 2011 at 1:27 PM | link to this | reply

I am a fan of sonnets and this was marvelous! The previous sonnet is meritorious, too! Welcome to Blogit! sam 

posted by sam444 on April 27, 2011 at 12:11 PM | link to this | reply

I love to read sonnets and have tried to write them from time to time, but feel somehow restrained by the form. It will be good to have you here to share this art of expression.

posted by UtahJay on April 27, 2011 at 9:14 AM | link to this | reply

It is such a delight to find you here first thing in the day...

and to receive another gem from your treasury of poems!

This one made me read it several times slowly, to follow the weave of theme and words, to see the image in the tapestry.  Finally, I see it is a love poem.

posted by Ciel on April 27, 2011 at 8:27 AM | link to this | reply

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