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I liked how you accentuated Charm in the close, it made it all come together and the reader can be hopeful for them too! Very nice, indeed! sam 

posted by sam444 on April 7, 2011 at 2:50 AM | link to this | reply

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No warrior some of us only write dreams.

posted by C_C_T on April 6, 2011 at 11:56 AM | link to this | reply

Yes, charming to be sure and somewhat sad, for you will never never know if you ever never go

posted by psychicwarrior on April 6, 2011 at 4:00 AM | link to this | reply

Re: It's a sweet whimsical poem filled with charm and tenderness...hope
Thank you Ariala and I thought that you had.

posted by C_C_T on April 6, 2011 at 12:13 AM | link to this | reply

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You will hear it louder one day FS. Thank you

posted by C_C_T on April 6, 2011 at 12:12 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you Jay

posted by C_C_T on April 6, 2011 at 12:11 AM | link to this | reply

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That is nice Femia be happy.

posted by C_C_T on April 6, 2011 at 12:10 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you Shobana

posted by C_C_T on April 6, 2011 at 12:09 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you Chuck

posted by C_C_T on April 6, 2011 at 12:08 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderful

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on April 5, 2011 at 9:37 PM | link to this | reply

Gorgeous poem CC..well done.

posted by shobana on April 5, 2011 at 8:32 PM | link to this | reply

Chiffchaff
To know you love someone and hold them dearly in your heart is as good as it gets for you have the desire of being in Love to a person you never held in your arms. Just the thought is overwhelming. Blessings Femia

posted by fememefeme on April 5, 2011 at 2:24 PM | link to this | reply

Yes, and that charm is your words.

posted by UtahJay on April 5, 2011 at 1:29 PM | link to this | reply

I can just hear that whisper.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 5, 2011 at 1:05 PM | link to this | reply

It's a sweet whimsical poem filled with charm and tenderness...hope
you find each other there...and yes, I have, to the ponderings left in my poem

posted by Ariala on April 5, 2011 at 12:36 PM | link to this | reply