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I really like this one. Keep it going.

posted by Justi on March 19, 2011 at 10:38 AM | link to this | reply

Very good Kabu I hope it is a runner.

posted by C_C_T on March 18, 2011 at 9:21 AM | link to this | reply

ooooh I'm already worried for them...

posted by lionreign on March 18, 2011 at 8:23 AM | link to this | reply

I knew it! Yes, more please!

posted by adnohr on March 17, 2011 at 7:49 PM | link to this | reply

A little like what is happening in the world now..look forward to more darling.

posted by shobana on March 17, 2011 at 7:44 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu
A great beginning...

posted by Nautikos on March 17, 2011 at 6:47 PM | link to this | reply

More, please. This reads like a great adventure...
I love the names of your characters.

posted by Pat_B on March 17, 2011 at 2:51 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Cheerygirl on March 17, 2011 at 12:01 PM | link to this | reply

The changing climate is something that we can very much relate to today.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 17, 2011 at 11:51 AM | link to this | reply

Great story, Kabu. Can't wait for the next episode!

posted by Rockingrector_retd on March 17, 2011 at 11:32 AM | link to this | reply

something tells me there's quite an adventure lying ahead....
Can't wait for more to come....:)

posted by Rumor on March 17, 2011 at 11:11 AM | link to this | reply

i like it

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on March 17, 2011 at 10:15 AM | link to this | reply

This is Excellent storytelling writing, Dear Kabu!
Looking forward to the continuation..  

posted by Raye09 on March 17, 2011 at 9:57 AM | link to this | reply

whats next for them

posted by Lanetay on March 17, 2011 at 9:40 AM | link to this | reply