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Intense passion Tzippy...you've a beautiful heart.

posted by yellowrose55 on September 5, 2010 at 5:55 PM | link to this | reply

animatedly sad but deep and intense and filled with so much emotions entwined...

posted by icedlatte on August 31, 2010 at 9:13 PM | link to this | reply

beautifully said

posted by lionreign on August 30, 2010 at 7:02 AM | link to this | reply

Very moving

posted by malcolm on August 29, 2010 at 3:59 AM | link to this | reply

I have had a personal dilemna of his getting over while he was alive, but in reality the man seems as if he were as misrebal as he made the people around him. I believe in eternal justice anyway and will let the issue go and let God myself. Some things still come back to sting: I know how that is. It must be exciting to ride a motorcycle if that is what you are describing at first.

posted by mariss9 on August 28, 2010 at 10:48 AM | link to this | reply

Tzippy

This poem speaks of much pain but also of optimism and the hope for joy...

posted by Nautikos on August 28, 2010 at 8:04 AM | link to this | reply

a very touching poem and yes...the writing should be done

posted by Kabu on August 26, 2010 at 7:06 PM | link to this | reply

Very nice, Tzippy. I liked the emphasis with the emoticons too.

posted by adnohr on August 26, 2010 at 6:17 PM | link to this | reply

The Truth of It All

Such a beautiful poem..

posted by MsJudy on August 26, 2010 at 3:58 PM | link to this | reply

What a beautiful flow and imagery! Thanks very much for your visit and checking out my other blog; hope you visit India some day!

posted by Nita09 on August 26, 2010 at 1:37 AM | link to this | reply

It's interesting how those old memories can suddenly rear their ugly heads and make us feel intense emotions...I imagine that writing some of this can be difficult. At the end I do find that writing difficult things is good for the old mind, body and spirit.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 25, 2010 at 7:25 PM | link to this | reply

I loved the way you used the emoticons
to emphasize the points expressed in your written work.

posted by TAPS. on August 25, 2010 at 6:46 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent imagery; I like the idea of a vortex where only joy resides! I always answer my door with this, "Enter laughing." It works, too! There is a lot of pain but to hold him accountable through expose has to be giving some type of relief! I will always be here for you! sam

posted by sam444 on August 25, 2010 at 1:40 PM | link to this | reply

And I thought the vortex

was a swirling fluid. Though I guess it would have a hypnotically calming effect.