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£R Nice movement with imagery sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
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BC-A
on August 15, 2010 at 7:05 AM
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Well Taps thank you for calling I expect you are right about the truth
posted by
C_C_T
on August 15, 2010 at 12:26 AM
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Re: I think you freed them in the nick of time, C.C.! They are flowing
Thank you Katray , well we can all dream.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 15, 2010 at 12:24 AM
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Lo Femia Yes I did read it, I wondered because I had written a little poem about Cherry Trees it was a bit religious, I just wondered if you would like it, if I can find it. I put another tower on, one of my older ones was running slowly, but I have had to change it back and I had some files on it. MB
posted by
C_C_T
on August 15, 2010 at 12:21 AM
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White of course Sam. Heres a nice pink one for you. Yes I agree Sam It's easy to brag
posted by
C_C_T
on August 15, 2010 at 12:15 AM
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Re: C.C., its hard to keep emotions bottled up and under wraps...
Yes it is hard to remain silent Rumour, perhaps sometimes one should. Hope the blocks gone
posted by
C_C_T
on August 15, 2010 at 12:09 AM
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Thank you Jay well I suppose the ribbons would have to be white but a soft texture.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 15, 2010 at 12:06 AM
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Thank you John nice that you think so, pity one can't do it all the time. However I always note good advice
posted by
C_C_T
on August 15, 2010 at 12:02 AM
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Thank you Bob hope you are OK.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 14, 2010 at 11:56 PM
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Re: Very nice.
Thank you Spitfire I love that name.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 14, 2010 at 11:55 PM
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Thank you Shobana I honestly had to pull this out of the blue read you later.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 14, 2010 at 11:53 PM
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You are right there FS. I suppose one should stick to the original thought.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 14, 2010 at 11:50 PM
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Thanks Wiley Hope you are both OK missed you both yesterday
posted by
C_C_T
on August 14, 2010 at 11:49 PM
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CORNCRAKE
Seems to me you did a great job of starting and finishing this very sensual poem
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 14, 2010 at 8:47 PM
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As the old saying goes, "It's easier said than done." Once one starts to get ready to do the act or acts the doubts start to creep on in...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 14, 2010 at 8:19 PM
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Hi CC, just marvelous, emotions can be so confusing I know and makes us wonder what they are at times. Thanks so much for your visit. Loved the poem.
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shobana
on August 14, 2010 at 7:00 PM
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Very nice.
posted by
SpitFire70
on August 14, 2010 at 6:01 PM
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so, so
I agree with JFM32! Nice work.
posted by
2902
on August 14, 2010 at 6:00 PM
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What an interesting write and use of uniqe languge images:"rattle in their cages crying to be set free; visions that tear apart single days, wrap ribbons around time" to name a few. These kinds of fresh, original images make this a wonderful read.
posted by
jfm32
on August 14, 2010 at 3:07 PM
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I also want to know what color your ribbons are? A great poem...thanks
posted by
UtahJay
on August 14, 2010 at 2:48 PM
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C.C., its hard to keep emotions bottled up and under wraps...
and I'm sure you did the right thing by freeing them here...
(words are the same way - whoever said "My lips are sealed," was fibbin..
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posted by
Rumor
on August 14, 2010 at 2:11 PM
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I so agree that actions are much hard to pull off than the mind leads us to believe! And what color are those ribbons? lol sam
posted by
sam444
on August 14, 2010 at 1:34 PM
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CC
Well writen verse and not so so.Your key has unlocked the emotions of wanting and so on. Great read. my friend Femia. By the way I left a comment on one of the comments for you about the cherry trees they are doing fine
posted by
fememefeme
on August 14, 2010 at 12:50 PM
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I think you freed them in the nick of time, C.C.! They are flowing
perfectly reaching and real; emotions dancing with your key.
posted by
Katray2
on August 14, 2010 at 12:40 PM
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Boy, that's the truth--that last phrase.
Good stuff here.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 14, 2010 at 12:19 PM
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