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sam
It was part imagination and part actual problem, but not the eye sight as such. I really hurt my mother's feeling when I reacted to something I shouldn't have. I should have zagged but having already taken a zig, I couldn't retract. This part was actual and I felt guilty ... the pine-serrated part, however, was imaginary. Until that time I was yet to recover. Things are sort of OK now. Any appreciation coming from you, I value a lot. That yelp which I wanted to shout was my kelp --- weed-like, and wished I cry out for help. That is how these three came together, and I am happy that you noticed the very essence of what I wished to express. Thank you much, Shelly.
posted by
anib
on July 11, 2010 at 7:40 PM
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A quiet zag can do wonders for the soul! Is this in reference to your eye sight about you and this plight quite often but was thinking all was well since you had not said anything on your blog! I do hope it is minor if there is indeed a problem! And I loved how you put the words together to form a rhyming pattern but more so in the way it was structured provided the most striking presentation for me! And yelp, help and kelp come to mind! Also, there are three possible ways to use kelp and now I must return to have another read for I could not make up my mind what I wanted it to say for me! KUDOS nonetheless! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on July 11, 2010 at 4:03 AM
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Do take care of your eyesight.Maine improvise kar liya Shanali ko Shamaji....
posted by
shamasehar
on July 7, 2010 at 11:31 PM
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Sinome
You humble me with your comment, princess Marta xoxoxo. Thank u.
posted by
anib
on July 7, 2010 at 10:27 PM
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Beautiful my friend... You are so talented... xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on July 7, 2010 at 7:11 PM
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Rumor
This is a fantastic comment, truly one to cherish for me. I tip my heart to you Sir.
posted by
anib
on July 7, 2010 at 10:16 AM
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shama
A twilight delight is so so so sweet
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posted by
anib
on July 7, 2010 at 10:14 AM
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abanerjee, nature truly does help us get everything back under control..
It may be a flock of birds spotted flying over a forest of pines, or so many other inumberable combinations....
when we at one with nature, the world's rage calms, and all is well....
posted by
Rumor
on July 7, 2010 at 7:52 AM
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Lovely imagery! A twilight delight!
posted by
shamasehar
on July 7, 2010 at 5:32 AM
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Re:
You liked it? Thanks v. much
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posted by
anib
on July 7, 2010 at 5:08 AM
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How extremely vibrant abanerjee, I liked the zig and the zag of it.
posted by
shobana
on July 7, 2010 at 12:20 AM
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