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You are not stuck...human; not stuck...now behave.
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 12, 2010 at 4:27 PM
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Fabulous! You conveyed the feeling every writer knows all too well with simplicity and clarity... You are not so stuck my friend :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on July 8, 2010 at 5:37 AM
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krisles
I know the feeling all too well.
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on July 6, 2010 at 1:49 PM
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Love this.....I feel this way sometimes.
posted by
yellowrose55
on July 6, 2010 at 1:38 PM
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Hi Krisles, I think you put your thoughts across very well indeed though Stuck. Great poem, I loved it very much. Sometimes I feel that way too. Thanks so much for stopping by and I had an anklet a long time ago but I lost it and now my girls wear them. I am thrilled that it had inspired you to write on it. Welcome to my blog.
posted by
shobana
on July 5, 2010 at 11:21 PM
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Stuck
Great poem...I really enjoyed it/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on July 5, 2010 at 9:19 PM
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Well Hiya, Kris-Sis!
Hope all is well -- for someone stuck you sure have a way with expressing it! Good to see ya back!
posted by
strat
on July 5, 2010 at 7:55 AM
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Mood
C Certainly talking’s like playing the keyboard. You want to shout heeey! But, were you already reviewed? Bc-a, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 5, 2010 at 4:46 AM
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Once again, as with another poet friend of mine,
Talking about being stuck
Writing about being blocked
Get the words flowing in a flood
posted by
cpklapper
on July 4, 2010 at 11:12 PM
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Krisles
Welcome back! And someone who conveys 'being stuck' as well as you do is in fact not stuck...It's one of life's great paradoxes...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 4, 2010 at 7:38 PM
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Well, for one who is stuck you certainly addressed it with ease and fine imagery! I think it is a bit of practice to keep it flowing! I always read something in particular when AI get stuck, if it is poetry that has me in a bind I read my favorite poet or one of the great! So good to read you again, now get out of that slump and write on right on! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 4, 2010 at 3:52 PM
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Stuck
Wonderful poem...I enjoyed reading it very much/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on July 4, 2010 at 2:25 PM
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Wow! Welcome back, I've missed you.
The others are right. You'll limber up and get unstuck in no time!
posted by
Pat_B
on July 4, 2010 at 1:39 PM
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Just like TAPS said.......
you see it's like riding a bicycle! Welcome back!
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on July 4, 2010 at 10:55 AM
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It will come back. Especially if you are back to stick around.
So good to see you here again.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 4, 2010 at 10:45 AM
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Writing can be like biking / swimming...
you may get rusty at times, but you'll never forget..enjoy! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on July 4, 2010 at 10:21 AM
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