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Re: Lovely..especially the ending! - Ash
Thank you Ash good luck with your writing.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 10, 2010 at 7:36 AM
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Re: Mr. MB
Hi fem this is a bit late in the day but I am glad that you can feel that prayers and good thoughts helped you perhaps there were more than you think. I suppose there is always a penalty to pay, I hope your arm feels better, I expect it will be bruised for a day or two, but hopefully all will be well. Thank you for your kind comments. MB
posted by
C_C_T
on June 10, 2010 at 7:33 AM
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Re: CORNCAKE
Hi Bill mostly ache corns I'm afraid be lucky
posted by
C_C_T
on June 10, 2010 at 7:26 AM
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Re: Sam
Thank you Sam would you whisper to me one day if you use a muse?
posted by
C_C_T
on June 10, 2010 at 7:24 AM
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Re: Shobana
Thank you for your kind comments Shobana mostly inspired by muse, but I wouldn't advise it, one sometimes has to write things that one does not wish. You have a popular form and if you are happy with it that's nice, go with what sells. Just enjoy the run.Be happy.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 10, 2010 at 7:22 AM
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Brilliant and very nostalgic I feel this poem is CC. I wonder sometimes at what inspires your poems. Sometimes they sound familiar to me. Thanks for the visit CC and what can I say if you insist on rhyming the words and pressing the comment button a little too soon? Stolen, frozen it shall be then..
posted by
shobana
on June 10, 2010 at 12:08 AM
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CORNCAKE
Z Sometimes it’s best to sprout a few leaves sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on June 9, 2010 at 8:44 PM
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Mr. MB
Only God can make a tree and Corncrake can make a lovely thought of verse.
Blessings Fema..Home from Hospital and sitting here on my computer writing a few comments every thing went well back very sore but I'm able to walk around without any pain hope it lasts.I wasn't able to sleep yesterday the nerve in my arm was killing me where they injected the meds..ached all night but, thankful for every ones blessings and prayersl Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on June 9, 2010 at 8:00 PM
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Lovely..especially the ending! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on June 9, 2010 at 5:39 PM
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KUDOS!!! I really enjoyed the personification in this poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 9, 2010 at 3:41 PM
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