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Kabu, I have a fascination with Mermaids..really.. I love them.

posted by hazel_st_cricket on May 12, 2010 at 6:10 AM | link to this | reply

I missed it :-(  so when I read your post today I came to find it... It is great!  Loved it.  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on May 11, 2010 at 8:11 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu
I read this yesterday, but my comment wasn't quite....suitable, somehow, LOL, since this is a family show, after all...I still can't find anything that wouldn't get me in hot water, so I'll just let it ride...but I like the poem...

posted by Nautikos on May 11, 2010 at 7:56 PM | link to this | reply

I'm afraid that I would be tempted
to "cop a gentle feel"
just to make certain that what I was seeing
was really, really, real.

posted by TAPS. on May 11, 2010 at 6:46 PM | link to this | reply

I wonder if a message in a bottle would work......maybe the right prince or friend would find it and be able to dive down to her. 

posted by mariss9 on May 11, 2010 at 4:46 PM | link to this | reply

I sense a lot of isolation for the mermaids. Some freedoms in general we take for granted.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 11, 2010 at 4:23 PM | link to this | reply

Kabuiepie-;)
Uh, I never did figure out she wanted to buy a telephone  but heck I'd be frustrated as all git out if you were the mermaid. I like the slim no fin look. Well anyways it's better than my poetry that's for sure darlin'

posted by WileyJohn on May 11, 2010 at 12:18 PM | link to this | reply

posted by lovelyladymonk on May 11, 2010 at 11:03 AM | link to this | reply

What a charming poem, my childhood fantasy of meeting a mermaid all came
up to the surface,  Great cute fantasy poem, I loved it

posted by Tzippy on May 11, 2010 at 10:25 AM | link to this | reply

Mermaid
Firstly I would like to commend you both for writing your book without dispute. Yes a charming little poem in your undisputable style that is meant to be exquisite, I'm sure, no I wonder do you think they wear tights?     

posted by C_C_T on May 11, 2010 at 7:59 AM | link to this | reply

Enchanting and amusing... I can just imagine mermaids in phones4U

posted by lionreign on May 11, 2010 at 7:26 AM | link to this | reply

Yes, I'm with Pat....underwater breathing and being a little more slim. It would be rather nice. But as for me, I don't even like to stick my face in the water, so Mermaidism is probably not in my future. Cute poem though, MamaH!

posted by Darson on May 11, 2010 at 7:10 AM | link to this | reply

How sweet to be able to breathe under water, and feel slim.

posted by Pat_B on May 11, 2010 at 6:34 AM | link to this | reply

That is lovely! A dip in the ocean of thought & you have a beautiful poem!

posted by shamasehar on May 11, 2010 at 5:10 AM | link to this | reply

U This is charming love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on May 10, 2010 at 10:50 PM | link to this | reply

you now have friends with mermaids

posted by Lanetay on May 10, 2010 at 10:12 PM | link to this | reply

This is really good, Kabu.
I always wanted to be a Mermaid but I'm afraid of water.

posted by SpitFire70 on May 10, 2010 at 9:38 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu
Why, that's a beautiful, beautiful poem. Such fun!

posted by anib on May 10, 2010 at 9:17 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu
Fun poem. None of us have to worry about your going off to join the Mermaids, they don't wear shoes.

posted by Justi on May 10, 2010 at 8:58 PM | link to this | reply

kabu, it is a divide that keeps us apert, sadly, in this world.  interesting poem for sure!

posted by dsm_tchr on May 10, 2010 at 7:25 PM | link to this | reply

LOL!!!    What a fun read!

posted by janey_ on May 10, 2010 at 7:24 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful poem Kabu and the mermaid sounds so mermaidish..(lovely I mean). Thanks for your lovely visit my friend and we are of the same blood for sure.

posted by shobana on May 10, 2010 at 6:58 PM | link to this | reply