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I can't believe no one even noticed you were gone

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on May 6, 2010 at 11:54 PM | link to this | reply

Tzippy
Excellent writing.

posted by WileyJohn on May 6, 2010 at 8:38 PM | link to this | reply

T Zippy
There are those who go through such hardships, their parents have and grandparents have and God knew, walked with them and we are too dumb, stilled in our own desires to know this is as an example for the whole world of the ways of God. If our government does not defend, caref for and aid Israel the whole world will be in this horrific condition but the real terror is for those who are not in God's will because they do not know He is! Be blessed dear one. God has you in his hand.

posted by Justi on May 6, 2010 at 2:58 PM | link to this | reply

God knew my dear. Even when the world is asleep, leaving you to fend for yourself. You shall never be alone for He is always there. Right beside you. 

posted by PinkWeaver on May 6, 2010 at 10:52 AM | link to this | reply

It's all in the way we view things, isn't it. Change our views, and change our world. I am learning this....often the hard way!!!

posted by Darson on May 6, 2010 at 6:27 AM | link to this | reply

Every movement done in fear. We sure take so much for granted in the United States.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 5, 2010 at 7:57 PM | link to this | reply

It is beautiful
sends chills down my spine. 

posted by KaBooM62 on May 5, 2010 at 7:00 PM | link to this | reply

It is incredibly real! The story touches me on all my senses! sam

posted by sam444 on May 5, 2010 at 4:52 PM | link to this | reply

how sad for you

posted by Lanetay on May 5, 2010 at 3:18 PM | link to this | reply

Your writing is so vivid and immediate
I have read books where the authors should envy your skill in that

posted by lionreign on May 5, 2010 at 7:49 AM | link to this | reply

Your posts are always excellent. You have been through so very much.
xoxoxoxooxox

posted by hazel_st_cricket on May 5, 2010 at 7:36 AM | link to this | reply

Some adults think children don't get it.
But your experience as a ten-year-old (and similar experiences among innocents in war zones even now) proves otherwise. I wish we all could have had more days to spend in grateful appreciation and fewer to live in dread and fear. 

posted by Pat_B on May 5, 2010 at 6:01 AM | link to this | reply

Tzippy, this is an uncanny combination of themes which releases the drama and human emotion.  Your construction of the moonless, soundless night and your own smallness pit men against nature, yet the overriding theme in all these entries is man's inhumanity to man.  it is quite an achievement for you!

posted by dsm_tchr on May 5, 2010 at 4:46 AM | link to this | reply

very beautifully expressed the wonder of the long night. the stars it has
that  effect on me till today...who am I to be of concern this nano second of life that is me.....oh and then the explosion......I would imagine you would be in trouble if you had been caught outside with such danger happening around you.

posted by Kabu on May 4, 2010 at 9:19 PM | link to this | reply

Loved the write... xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on May 4, 2010 at 8:50 PM | link to this | reply