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The dialect really enhances the story and gives it a realness. I liked how she envisioned her dirty deed as it were! He is a brat! sam

posted by sam444 on April 29, 2010 at 7:36 AM | link to this | reply

Re: how touching it is the way you tell the tale, and
Well...we are here to learn...it's never too late to get out until you aren't breathing. so take the plunge and remember you always have a choice stay and continue or leave and open yourself up to all the possibilities that are out there...they are endless...i don't regret leaving my ex one bit...it was scary at first but I didn't want to wind up dead and him raising our son.  Go for it!  and if you need a cheering section consider me there...

posted by Annicita on April 28, 2010 at 11:18 PM | link to this | reply

how touching it is the way you tell the tale, and
when our foolish childhood stupidities follow us for a long long time, perhaps for the rest of our life. I know because I did the same stupid thing you did. i am still paying for it, perhaps I will be for the rest of my life.

posted by Tzippy on April 28, 2010 at 8:49 PM | link to this | reply