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'I swallowed every word out of his mouth like it was the last drop of water' - Great desciption - your sentence says it all. You're in there very deep - swim, girl!
posted by
adnohr
on February 7, 2010 at 11:29 AM
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I go through similar thoughts...
posted by
Straightforward
on February 7, 2010 at 4:35 AM
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I don't write romance novels--mainly because I can't put feelings into words like you do so brilliantly. There are many flavors of love, but choosing the one that will wear well and stay fresh over the years . . ? I wonder if anyone finds that (or maybe rarely) without making wrong choices first.
posted by
OutaBreath
on February 6, 2010 at 11:29 AM
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Tzippy
J:( Careful, listening, but feeling anxious I hope that writing about your relationship brings you as much enlightenment as it brings to your readers love. BC-A, Bill’s Roost
posted by
BC-A
on February 6, 2010 at 9:49 AM
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This is brilliantly written, Tzippy, the best I've read so far of yours. You are bringing deep emotion onto the page in a masterful way. Overshadowing it is a sense of impending doom -- I'm just happy for you that you have survived the experience, and your wise thoughts about what love truly is will stand you in great stead for a happy future. Michael
posted by
The_Saint
on February 5, 2010 at 8:42 PM
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Tzippy - Being in that situation at that time..I am quite surprised that you could come to terms with it not being love. Those feelings that you have expressed has every element of someone in love. You know Tzippy, I think there is a thin line between passion, love, possessiveness and need. Very interesting story. Thanks so much for the comment in my blog and I'm glad you liked it.
posted by
shobana
on February 5, 2010 at 8:38 PM
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I see things slowly starting to break down...Very wise words about what love is not.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 5, 2010 at 7:09 PM
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Re: My poor darling....when there is a doubt and concern in the deep recesses
I wish I would have done that, but unfortunatley I was not as wise as I should have been
posted by
Tzippy
on February 5, 2010 at 9:46 AM
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My poor darling....when there is a doubt and concern in the deep recesses
of your heart,it is time to break that heart and run. ....advice from an elder who has experienced much secret women's business
posted by
Kabu
on February 5, 2010 at 9:20 AM
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Tzippy
"Whence there is love there is pain."
(Spanish Proverb)
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 5, 2010 at 9:16 AM
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A complete obsession
Anxiously awaiting to see what happens next
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on February 5, 2010 at 8:59 AM
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I know all these feelings but I have had obessions with a lot of men in the past and you see I am alone now
posted by
Lanetay
on February 5, 2010 at 8:57 AM
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It's fascination, obsession, or as Disney put it in "Bambi"
you're twitterpated. It's like being seventeen again, overwhelmed by the urge to merge, blind to everything else. Intoxicating, isn't it? Ooh, it's scary.
posted by
Pat_B
on February 5, 2010 at 6:03 AM
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Tzippy
You were 'swept off your feet', by a torrent of infatuation...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 5, 2010 at 5:28 AM
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I think you are right! But, love takes time to grow! I think that one can be over the edge as it were when a new relationship makes us feel great! The feeling are explored and you have made a fair assessment! What to do next? sam
posted by
sam444
on February 5, 2010 at 4:32 AM
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Very perceptive!
posted by
Nita09
on February 4, 2010 at 11:33 PM
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f Love makes good diet control love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on February 4, 2010 at 10:55 PM
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Fine work, my friend!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on February 4, 2010 at 9:31 PM
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