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This is growth,took me sometime for my soul to grow the right frame of mind
posted by
Mystereo
on February 27, 2010 at 7:31 AM
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Wonderful feelings
Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on February 12, 2010 at 8:03 PM
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Feelings
Just whisper how you in induce them, that will fine by me. Personification, I guess so or it might be the easy way out. Thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 10, 2010 at 12:50 AM
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For sure, I hope that time for you is now.
posted by
yellowrose55
on February 9, 2010 at 6:27 PM
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good poem!
posted by
Whacky
on February 8, 2010 at 9:46 PM
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Alot said with very few words - leaving me with alot to contemplate.
posted by
janey_
on February 5, 2010 at 9:04 PM
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Hi, i really liked this poem. Can't say much more than that. But I really do.
posted by
kasperhoe
on February 5, 2010 at 1:57 PM
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When the feelings that I want will come...
It's nice to have free thoughts and feelings without the intrusion of events or other people.
posted by
2Philomena
on February 5, 2010 at 5:24 AM
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Oh it should have been without
posted by
anib
on February 2, 2010 at 9:59 PM
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Straightforward
Words coming of their own with being induced (or seduced) is most definitely to be in another world, out of the world, in fact.
posted by
anib
on February 2, 2010 at 9:58 PM
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Short and sweet.
posted by
numberonemcfan
on February 2, 2010 at 6:06 AM
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Very well done and so, so true
posted by
skye08
on February 1, 2010 at 10:30 PM
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Very true!
Wonderful expression
posted by
lionreign
on February 1, 2010 at 7:46 AM
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Will come
Wonderful feelings made me think of who I was as I read these few lines that had a very powerful impact on me, from YOU. Lv Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on January 31, 2010 at 7:59 PM
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sometimes it's best to just say how you feel outright ...
but then there are times when words are better left unsaid - only you can decide which.
posted by
_Symphony_
on January 31, 2010 at 5:31 AM
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Beautifully said Former... and they will come, those feelings you seek and now force through... one day your heart will flood with them and then your pen will fly on the page telling of them, but I doubt that you will write then much differently than now for this poem is excellent :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 30, 2010 at 6:05 PM
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In my experience I have found negative emotions to sometimes come from within without being induced. Oddly enough never the happy ones.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 30, 2010 at 10:35 AM
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Do you think that will ever happen?
posted by
TAPS.
on January 30, 2010 at 6:42 AM
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Wow! Introspection in its finest hour! Well done and BRAVO!!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 30, 2010 at 6:30 AM
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very good every word has meaning.
posted by
Kabu
on January 29, 2010 at 10:38 PM
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