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This is beautiful - so moving --- it reminds me of " I thirst" and this seeks a quenching --- write more for I am enamored - moved by your poetry, dear Aba ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on December 25, 2009 at 6:41 AM
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It's a beautiful poem reaching out toward the light..."rain me wet".
Cleansing grace takes all the pain away..
posted by
yellowrose55
on December 24, 2009 at 10:54 PM
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sam444
Know it ma'am that it has a lot to do with your constant and unceasing inspirational showerings that I dared attempt writing poetry,
and now I am enjoying and gaining in confidence. My profuse thanks to you for all you have done as my mentor
. You, I adore.
posted by
anib
on December 24, 2009 at 9:53 AM
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Tzippy
I really can't thank you enough for your most encouraging pat on my back. I am new to poetry so it is a great feel. Thanks a ton.
posted by
anib
on December 24, 2009 at 9:48 AM
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9STAR
Thank you, didn't see you for a long time dear friend, so I am happy to see you and finding it beautiful.
posted by
anib
on December 24, 2009 at 9:45 AM
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Kabu
You never fail to gladden, crediting me for my efforts. Both of you are so kind.
posted by
anib
on December 24, 2009 at 9:43 AM
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WileyJohn
Thank you kind sir
posted by
anib
on December 24, 2009 at 9:41 AM
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: shamasehar
Can not, I'm sure, if you think it so. Thanks a lot !
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posted by
anib
on December 24, 2009 at 9:40 AM
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shadesofblue
So glad you visited and liked my offering
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posted by
anib
on December 24, 2009 at 9:38 AM
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Darson
Your watchfullnes and sensitivity, of course, natural, I admire.
posted by
anib
on December 24, 2009 at 9:37 AM
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magic_moon
I too am still ... wondering
, thanks for your thinking so.
posted by
anib
on December 24, 2009 at 9:35 AM
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Indeed, let it pour down with all the grace that is befitting! Great cadence, and I especially enjoyed the word usage and placement! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 24, 2009 at 8:40 AM
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Beautiful.....
posted by
Star5_
on December 24, 2009 at 8:05 AM
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this is a classic
that is toucing, deep and insghtful and vey HONEST, all I can say is wow
posted by
Tzippy
on December 24, 2009 at 7:37 AM
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wonderful powerful well done my friend.
posted by
Kabu
on December 23, 2009 at 10:25 PM
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abanerjee
Very well done my friend
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 23, 2009 at 9:01 PM
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Can such a powerful plea go unheard! Certainly not!
posted by
shamasehar
on December 23, 2009 at 8:19 PM
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Powerful
posted by
shadesofblue
on December 23, 2009 at 6:15 PM
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Beautiful, once again. I love it that you incorporated water at the last.
posted by
Darson
on December 23, 2009 at 1:23 PM
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...there is a joy emanating from your poetry, aba, which speaks of one who has found his home! 
moon
posted by
magic_moon
on December 23, 2009 at 9:47 AM
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