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The note of sadness expressed is very poignant, and if it's for real I hope it'll pass soon and again you'll be rejuvenated in happiness.Only, do not despair under any circumstances, my friend.

posted by anib on December 27, 2009 at 7:32 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful
and very fitting for me to read on this day.

posted by Azur on December 24, 2009 at 4:42 PM | link to this | reply

My goodness, this touched me the very fiber of my being! Poignant is the best word to describe it all, the very best word! sam

posted by sam444 on December 24, 2009 at 7:17 AM | link to this | reply

Whoa. This is giving me a lot to think about.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on December 23, 2009 at 7:59 PM | link to this | reply

 ~ such poignancy - and leaves me to ponder my own life --- Elyse

posted by elysianfields on December 23, 2009 at 8:05 AM | link to this | reply

Life does take us down different paths,zigzag ones,I agree,at times you can feel lost in the maze,but wait & watch there might be a lead hidden,a direction hint given somewhere,sometime...........!

posted by shamasehar on December 23, 2009 at 3:59 AM | link to this | reply

Life
It is straightforward and it is difficult do this.

posted by C_C_T on December 23, 2009 at 3:33 AM | link to this | reply

Straight

posted by C_C_T on December 23, 2009 at 3:31 AM | link to this | reply

loneliness comes to mind when reading your poem - I hope you know your blogit friends care -

posted by janey_ on December 23, 2009 at 1:09 AM | link to this | reply

Dear friend, I hope that you will be with us for a very long time, so that we can benefit from your wisdom. With very best wishes to you.  

posted by elinjo on December 23, 2009 at 1:01 AM | link to this | reply