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How often we all ignore - knocks - tapping - beating at our doors ~ This is powerful - great writing again, Aba --- I am enjoying your poetry --- it is so wonderful to watch you gain your momentum --- its a joy to watch your metamorphisis.
~ Elyse says Write On!!!
posted by
elysianfields
on December 25, 2009 at 6:43 AM
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Well written; we leave the door unopened in all facets when we do not hear the knocking at the door! I like that you are experimenting with various avenues enroute to finding your own style and voice! I know I am going to enjoying observing your development! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 24, 2009 at 8:38 AM
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Troosha
Many thanks ma'am for understanding me, but a sensitive heart like yours, a great poetess, you always do.
posted by
anib
on December 23, 2009 at 9:04 AM
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elinjo
Glad that my thoughts convey in equal measure with your's, about lost opportumities in life. Thank you.
posted by
anib
on December 23, 2009 at 9:02 AM
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WileyJohn
More than age, it cn happen in any stage. God, the guest comes avisiting but goes back seeing our doors closed.
posted by
anib
on December 23, 2009 at 8:58 AM
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Open heart, open mind, "open door" - so much would be missed if we closed any of them. Nicely done!
posted by
Troosha
on December 23, 2009 at 6:46 AM
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Thanks for sharing this excellent poem! It made me think of lost opportunities in my life too. Thanks for your visit and comment.
posted by
elinjo
on December 23, 2009 at 12:57 AM
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abanerjee
Beautiful expressed feelings about aging, I identify my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 22, 2009 at 9:56 PM
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Sinome
You saying so warms me. Am I comin' of age
? Thank you and xoxoxo - :)
posted by
anib
on December 22, 2009 at 7:55 PM
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Excellent my friend... xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on December 22, 2009 at 7:50 PM
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Tzippy
Besides your blog, I just love your comments too.
Untitled title sometimes, is even btter.
. Thank you so very much.
posted by
anib
on December 22, 2009 at 7:44 PM
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love your poems
you got me with unopened door, I am searching for a title all day today and keep coming up with nothing. Unopened door is a great title, the poem is well centered on the moment, well said and yes, I had to read it twice :) and loved it each time
posted by
Tzippy
on December 22, 2009 at 7:37 PM
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Rumor
Two, three reads to get to the heart of the poem is really satisfying for a writer with thoughts for the reader to unearth., but that you did, for this I thank you from the botom of my heart. Thank you sir.
posted by
anib
on December 22, 2009 at 6:47 PM
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Abanerjee, a greatly moving poem...it took me two or three reads, but by
then I was thinking, man, so true indeed...we let opportunities slip away, and life slips away at the same time...(sorry, trying not to be too melodramatic here..:)..
....
posted by
Rumor
on December 22, 2009 at 3:17 PM
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Kabu
"Make us beat ourselves with a big stick". thinking, I will, I will not, I will, I will not Hahaha
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posted by
anib
on December 22, 2009 at 9:14 AM
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Ariala
That I could contribute to a question we all often ask, and your finding it good is a great feeling of satisfaction for me. Thank you.
posted by
anib
on December 22, 2009 at 9:12 AM
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magic_moon
Thank you sir. Your liking, and my confidence being assured in my new love, poetry. Still a novice.
posted by
anib
on December 22, 2009 at 9:09 AM
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yes make us beat ourselves with a big stick for not always feeding the
stranger, for not always sharing our good fortune and wealth. LOL this is actually very very special and yes thought provoking. A lost opportunity may never come again.
posted by
Kabu
on December 22, 2009 at 9:00 AM
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A question I often ask...wonderful work
posted by
Ariala
on December 22, 2009 at 8:53 AM
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...excellent message aba! moon
posted by
magic_moon
on December 22, 2009 at 8:50 AM
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snowview
Thanx Nita, I don't know why but I love to provoke, I'm glad that it did.
posted by
anib
on December 22, 2009 at 8:39 AM
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Excellent and thought provoking! Thanks very much for your comment on my post. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on December 22, 2009 at 8:34 AM
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