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Lovely.. a lot to think about in this piece.
posted by
mneme
on December 15, 2009 at 5:53 PM
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I thought this was a very nice philosophical poem! It has great congruity and the message very powerful! It is deep feeling, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 15, 2009 at 6:10 AM
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I enjoyed your stream of consciousness
and of images.
posted by
cpklapper
on December 15, 2009 at 5:25 AM
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I loved this poem :-) I hope to read you again soon :-)
posted by
Sinome
on December 14, 2009 at 6:35 PM
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It is difficult to be with one who is not as enlightened as you and
you have spoke these feelings so well.
posted by
skye08
on December 14, 2009 at 4:20 PM
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Re: Flow
aww thank you so much
posted by
PoetikliNclynd
on December 14, 2009 at 3:40 PM
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Flow
I love the way your words flow, and move. And your voice...so very unlike mine, but you are able to speak what I feel. You have an amazing gift.
posted by
shadesofblue
on December 14, 2009 at 11:40 AM
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