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Thanks to all my friends here- hardilaziz

posted by hardilaziz on October 23, 2009 at 10:02 AM | link to this | reply

powerful lines!
after all, what does one more stain matter?  (everything, I think...)   great post

posted by lionreign on October 23, 2009 at 8:09 AM | link to this | reply

That's a poignant call for an end! sam

posted by sam444 on October 23, 2009 at 4:29 AM | link to this | reply

 ...........yaad aa gaya .......lines from an old hindi song............iss dil mein abhi aur bhi zakhmon ki jaagha hai.......

posted by shamasehar on October 22, 2009 at 9:56 PM | link to this | reply

hardilaziz
Not a great thought to sleep on......but expressive...

posted by WileyJohn on October 22, 2009 at 9:42 PM | link to this | reply

very scary is this symbolic of deep pain inflicted by someone or expected?

posted by Kabu on October 22, 2009 at 6:55 PM | link to this | reply

This is so deep...and I must admit, trying to translate it, I am wanting to understand... Elyse

posted by elysianfields on October 22, 2009 at 6:44 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful expression ....

posted by afzal50 on October 22, 2009 at 5:58 PM | link to this | reply

That's intense...Had to read it more then once.

posted by yellowrose55 on October 22, 2009 at 4:50 PM | link to this | reply

This is really making me think. In the Gnostic gospels, there's a story of Jesus tellinmg someone to take his sword and push it through a wall. I have no idea what it means!!

posted by Rockingrector_retd on October 22, 2009 at 11:14 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Star5_ on October 22, 2009 at 6:59 AM | link to this | reply