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Re: Hi El,
I love delving into the recesses of the minds of the poets to unearth their inner feelings and as to their exprssing them the way they do, and sometimes what is not said becomes more important than what is -- that is the beauty of poetry, prose is plain. My own credentials, however, as a poet, is quite suspect, and that is why when people of your standing praise me, my heart can feel the warmth. You, sam, Sinome, among others, are such. Thank you so very much

posted by anib on September 24, 2009 at 1:06 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Shobs, many thanks for seeing 2 sides of man's nature
 

posted by anib on September 23, 2009 at 9:15 PM | link to this | reply

Dear Abanerjee:  very well thought out and complex study here...so many levels to read and retain and absorb.  I write from my whole being when I write and as I have commented before never really paid attention (yes, even in basic lit class) to form etc, et al ~  I would like to write like the elder/former poets and one day when I grow up maybe I will reach that level... this is good, your study...good for growth.  I'm impressed and it is very difficult, I find to express exactly - to reflect or bring about reflection on what I 'see'; sense, taste and all.  I love nature, I love humanity, I love Life ~ I so enjoy your blog.   brings about ponder and great conversation.  ~El  *and yes, please, it is my honor that you would want a copy of my writing; feel free.

posted by elysianfields on September 23, 2009 at 7:53 PM | link to this | reply

Abanerjee - A very insightful write..one that shows 2 sides of man's nature...

posted by shobana on September 23, 2009 at 7:49 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome
Many thanks, and it's good that I was able to write on one of your favorite poets.xoxo

posted by anib on September 23, 2009 at 7:21 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: sam, oh, not tap but pat

posted by anib on September 23, 2009 at 7:20 PM | link to this | reply

Re:
That was an insightful input from you sam, and I am so glad that you found the discussion good. Coming from a great poet like you is like getting a tap on my back.Thank you .

posted by anib on September 23, 2009 at 7:19 PM | link to this | reply

Great essay... Dylan is one of my favorites... and you have done a great job getting into his mind here.  xoxo

posted by Sinome on September 23, 2009 at 6:50 PM | link to this | reply

I found it amazing how he seems to be isolated from his own thoughts, for it appears his ego is unsustained and he cannot muster even to speak to his veins! Small example! I pulled it up and read it and was charmed by his 5 line stanzas and wrapping with a couplet that gives the poem it congruity! A fine discussion! sam

posted by sam444 on September 23, 2009 at 2:02 PM | link to this | reply

Re: shamasehar
" ... we are neither apart nor different from one another", strung in the common thread of humanty, judaai, momentary disassociation, therefore, is only temporal. That was a beauty of an assessment! .

posted by anib on September 23, 2009 at 9:42 AM | link to this | reply

Hi,it was a great read! A common thread runs through all consciousness all one has to do is turn ones eyes in the right direction..........reminds me of these lines...........Tu aur nahin main aur nahin, na tu mujh se judaa na main thuj se judaa, tu aur nahin..........meaning we are neither apart nor different from one another..........we are one!

posted by shamasehar on September 23, 2009 at 9:27 AM | link to this | reply