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Ooooh, this was good.

posted by Darson on October 3, 2009 at 6:58 PM | link to this | reply

Sweet sigh

What an inspiration to live by ~ Elyse says 'write on'

posted by elysianfields on September 20, 2009 at 7:45 AM | link to this | reply

I live by this "motto"...you speak the truth; we all need to move on and become something more than where we are!

posted by Ryan_Morrow on September 16, 2009 at 7:52 PM | link to this | reply

How beautifully written. A breathtaking haiku. I Love it.

posted by yellowrose55 on September 14, 2009 at 8:40 PM | link to this | reply

This is one to come back to

posted by Azur on September 5, 2009 at 6:45 PM | link to this | reply

There's something to be said for living in the moment.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on September 2, 2009 at 3:30 PM | link to this | reply

 Enjoy! BC-A, Bill’s Avant-Garde Collection

 

posted by BC-A on September 2, 2009 at 7:04 AM | link to this | reply

Another awesome Haiku! How cool to be inspired by another poem, too! Shelly

posted by sam444 on September 2, 2009 at 5:29 AM | link to this | reply

You captured the essence of what I felt when I wrote that poem :-)  You are quite talented my friend... its beautiful xoxo

posted by Sinome on September 1, 2009 at 9:50 AM | link to this | reply

I think there is a romance in your life. Secret and with long separations.

posted by Kabu on September 1, 2009 at 9:05 AM | link to this | reply

I really like this

You seem in good form after your travel.

posted by Azur on August 31, 2009 at 11:52 PM | link to this | reply

The best moment in which to dwell is when he kisses you. 
He isn't doing anything else.
You are his whole universe at the moment.
                                  (~a quote that I cannot remember exactly how it goes or who said it)

posted by TAPS. on August 31, 2009 at 10:57 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent words Naut!

posted by merkie on August 31, 2009 at 8:12 PM | link to this | reply

Naut ~.~

Great haiku! Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on August 31, 2009 at 8:09 PM | link to this | reply