Comments on haiku no. 27

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Nautikos - this is truly lovely...maybe the strings were fragile.

posted by shobana on July 13, 2009 at 7:51 PM | link to this | reply

Kudos!

posted by hardilaziz on July 13, 2009 at 10:31 AM | link to this | reply

Oh Naut! I love this one! Is it an observance of a sort?! Shelly

posted by sam444 on July 12, 2009 at 9:13 PM | link to this | reply

Very talented!

posted by Ariala on July 11, 2009 at 6:08 PM | link to this | reply

A nice little poem there.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 11, 2009 at 5:13 PM | link to this | reply

A fragile and precious haiku...

posted by yellowrose55 on July 11, 2009 at 4:03 PM | link to this | reply

it was more of a uh sorry. :)  hit way too close.

posted by texture on July 11, 2009 at 2:48 PM | link to this | reply

I actually said  "Auuuw" out loud at the end.

posted by texture on July 11, 2009 at 2:47 PM | link to this | reply

Naut
Awww..... now that's a gem of a Haiku!!!  

posted by Troosha on July 11, 2009 at 2:02 PM | link to this | reply

 A pearl on the string of your haikus! priceless!

posted by merkie on July 11, 2009 at 12:57 PM | link to this | reply

Smileycons!  Absolutely Lovely!

posted by BrightIrish on July 11, 2009 at 10:13 AM | link to this | reply

 A good question and topic. BCA, BillJRoost

posted by BC-A on July 11, 2009 at 7:10 AM | link to this | reply

Naut ~.~
Great Haiku! ...so much said in so few words. Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding. ~SS

posted by soulspeaker on July 11, 2009 at 6:42 AM | link to this | reply

That was a pearl of a poem!

posted by elinjo on July 10, 2009 at 9:36 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful work thanks for sharing.

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on July 10, 2009 at 7:44 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful work thanks for sharing.

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on July 10, 2009 at 7:43 PM | link to this | reply

I wore smiles for him
lovely cultured pearly ones
'til he broke the string

posted by TAPS. on July 10, 2009 at 7:10 PM | link to this | reply

A string of pearls here

posted by Azur on July 10, 2009 at 5:33 PM | link to this | reply

Naut
That is great.

posted by Justi on July 10, 2009 at 2:44 PM | link to this | reply