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so very clever! Poetry that plays!

posted by merkie on June 17, 2009 at 10:36 PM | link to this | reply

Tired
Tired

So tired i don't even know how to spell tired.

It just looks wrong

like

cracks in the sidewalk

or something you look

at so long you can't

tell what it is anymore.

ABSTRACT

In early art it was the theory of the

artful accident. ( I forgot the actual term, but as I said, too tired to look it up) (( tomorrow)) perhaps.

Nothing happens randomly

Nothing happens that does not

enhance.

If i have spelled it wrong, spell check did not catch it, or it thought I meant I was tied up with tires.

I do need tires.

posted by texture on June 17, 2009 at 7:26 PM | link to this | reply

 Thank you all for the comments. Daring they were. :) 

posted by texture on June 17, 2009 at 1:10 PM | link to this | reply

Stunning work indeed...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on June 17, 2009 at 9:43 AM | link to this | reply

Smileycons!  Very nice poem!

posted by BrightIrish on June 16, 2009 at 4:55 PM | link to this | reply

Such dares are always worth taking
if only for the fun you'll have

posted by lionreign on June 16, 2009 at 7:30 AM | link to this | reply

I like it!
Just had a conversation today with my son about the benefits of prying one's self out of one's comfort zone, as he has begun to discover since he went away, far away, to college, and lived.

posted by Ciel on June 15, 2009 at 8:48 PM | link to this | reply

Intriguing
That could mean stopping meditating; back into "the tempest of thought". Ambiguous yet captivating.

posted by Sudanym_ on June 15, 2009 at 10:34 AM | link to this | reply

Is that a questioning anguished statement or is that a challenge?

posted by Straightforward on June 14, 2009 at 7:06 PM | link to this | reply

Very good.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 13, 2009 at 4:52 PM | link to this | reply

posted by PlumpyNutCase on June 13, 2009 at 3:48 AM | link to this | reply

I adored tempest of thought; great line! sam

posted by sam444 on June 12, 2009 at 6:31 PM | link to this | reply

texture
That was winsome and I really enjoed it luv, yup, I dare you..

posted by WileyJohn on June 12, 2009 at 3:40 PM | link to this | reply

Yes, I do... Great poem!

posted by Chilitree on June 12, 2009 at 9:54 AM | link to this | reply

 Kressie Baer*s All Aah it’s an accomplishment to reach out by your mind. BillJRoost

 

posted by BC-A on June 12, 2009 at 9:49 AM | link to this | reply

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