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Lovely. This poem makes me very curious about the woman who is the "jewel" putting on jewels. Society tends to teach us that being extravagant and being ostentatious will make no person appealing...but the woman you have portrayed gives instances of being a softer, sweeter, kinder, human being than the one society would try to portray - so it makes me wonder about the woman in the poem and who she really is.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 9, 2009 at 7:59 PM
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Re: Shobana
Hey Bhaskar..how are you. Thank you so much.
posted by
shobana
on May 25, 2009 at 11:41 PM
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Excellent!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 25, 2009 at 11:23 PM
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Shobana
A wow to you shobs and
s for a sparkling poem as this.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on May 25, 2009 at 11:20 PM
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Wonderfully expressed!
posted by
Chilitree
on May 25, 2009 at 11:07 PM
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Shobana
She enjoyed putting the jewels on I bet....
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 25, 2009 at 8:45 PM
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The sparkle is from the woman!
posted by
merkie
on May 25, 2009 at 8:48 AM
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Sparkling imagery. Thank you.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on May 25, 2009 at 1:17 AM
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Very nicely adorned in this imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 24, 2009 at 9:39 PM
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Women are beautiful even with no jewels. This beauty deserves all the jewels of the world.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on May 24, 2009 at 7:58 PM
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Re: A happy woman is a jewel of her man....
Well you're right there 9star. Thank you for your comment.
posted by
shobana
on May 24, 2009 at 7:09 PM
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Re: Hardilaziz
Both together, she the jewels wearing jewels. thanks for your comment.
posted by
shobana
on May 24, 2009 at 7:09 PM
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A happy woman is a jewel of her man....
posted by
Star5_
on May 24, 2009 at 7:07 PM
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Woman radiating beauty or is it in the precious stones
Great write!
posted by
hardilaziz
on May 24, 2009 at 7:03 PM
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