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Excellent rewrite.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 30, 2009 at 5:13 PM | link to this | reply

 I love your view. The Macy’s parade’s being moved to Sixth Avenue for pedestrian squares in Times Square love. BCA, Bill*s Roost

posted by BC-A on March 30, 2009 at 2:01 PM | link to this | reply

Great, especially...

The arrogance of mankind makes them look bright

posted by Sudanym_ on March 30, 2009 at 12:34 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Glad you “polished off” an old poem (which probably didn’t require much polishing).  It breathes of any big city.  Nicely done!

posted by Troosha on March 30, 2009 at 11:10 AM | link to this | reply

It's simply beautiful .

posted by afzal50 on March 30, 2009 at 9:19 AM | link to this | reply

beautifully written

so alive and vivid... although I really never want to go to a city so large

posted by lionreign on March 30, 2009 at 8:55 AM | link to this | reply

I can picture the buildings, through your vivid descriptions. Thanks for a glimpse of NYC! Thanks for for your comment on my post---we'd love to have you as a citizen! but till then, do visit us at least---you'd be most welcome! Nita.

posted by snowview on March 30, 2009 at 8:07 AM | link to this | reply

A fine piece of writing Sinome

excellent imagery reviving my hazy memory of a visit there so long ago; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on March 30, 2009 at 5:31 AM | link to this | reply

You captured the feel of New York so perfectly :) 

posted by calia14 on March 30, 2009 at 12:06 AM | link to this | reply

Perfect...

Capturing the moment as you live it is a great poetic tool.  I can picture it pretty much as I imagine you saw it.

posted by food4thought on March 29, 2009 at 9:21 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

A beautiful poem. It's been a while since I was last in NYC, but you make me want to visit again...

posted by Nautikos on March 29, 2009 at 7:04 PM | link to this | reply

Such a great poem my Sinome! I loved the imagery! You captured it very well! sammy loves you!!! xoxoxoxo

posted by sam444 on March 29, 2009 at 4:09 PM | link to this | reply

very nice and sad at the same time

posted by lustorlove on March 29, 2009 at 10:38 AM | link to this | reply

ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT, my friend. xoxooxox

posted by hazel_st_cricket on March 29, 2009 at 10:16 AM | link to this | reply