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Short lived but still a very pleasant dream.

posted by hardilaziz on March 3, 2009 at 11:43 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful post, as usual! God bless. Nita.

posted by Nita09 on March 3, 2009 at 8:22 AM | link to this | reply

Lightning hit the wires when my Dad was on the old phone and deafened him
in that ear forever. and that was his good ear.

posted by Kabu on March 2, 2009 at 9:03 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Love the poem of course.Memories of lightening stricking the wire for the old telephone resistor in my dad's old house years back and set fire to the house but thankfully, only the roof burned over the kitchen.....

posted by WileyJohn on March 2, 2009 at 8:23 PM | link to this | reply

nothing wrong with dreaming as long as you come back to reality

posted by Lanetay on March 2, 2009 at 7:17 PM | link to this | reply

A shy soul. Such an interesting concept.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 2, 2009 at 4:37 PM | link to this | reply

I saw a large stone church get struck by lightning once.  It freaked me out.  Before long the whole thing was on fire from the inside where the lightening had run down.  It was completely gutted and the roof gone.  All that was left were the outer stone walls.  I had a ring-side seat to the whole thing on our front porch because it was just across the street with a parking lot between us.   It gave me a lot of respect for lightening.  I love the poem.

posted by TAPS. on March 2, 2009 at 12:29 PM | link to this | reply

This is fantastic! The cadence was perfect and the imagery superb! Good morning sweetie! I hope you have a fabulous day! sammie xoxoxo

posted by sam444 on March 2, 2009 at 8:34 AM | link to this | reply

WOW ! Really love it !

posted by hazel_st_cricket on March 2, 2009 at 8:32 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderful expression ...

posted by afzal50 on March 2, 2009 at 8:29 AM | link to this | reply

WOW..........lovely

posted by Star5_ on March 2, 2009 at 7:42 AM | link to this | reply

EXCELLENT SCRIPT NOW WRITE THE BOOK!
-=RenSpur=-

posted by RenSpur on March 2, 2009 at 12:43 AM | link to this | reply

How well I know this dream
 Thank You You write the most beautiful poems with emotions that are always so perfect.  Thank you so much for your support.  Your positive energy is a joy in my life.





posted by skye08 on March 2, 2009 at 12:34 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful dream of a longing heart.

posted by Chilitree on March 2, 2009 at 12:07 AM | link to this | reply