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Miss you Wigopa. I hope your health is good and all is well with you.

posted by yellowrose55 on June 20, 2009 at 3:58 AM | link to this | reply

Are you better now??

posted by mneme on May 29, 2009 at 3:05 AM | link to this | reply

So, when will you be back?
You are missed.  Hope all is well with you.  I Miss YouI Miss You

posted by Kolekshuns on April 23, 2009 at 4:38 AM | link to this | reply

This is a lovely way to describe growing old gracefully ...

posted by mneme on April 20, 2009 at 6:29 AM | link to this | reply

This is the first thing I've read of yours.  Nice poem.  Wow, that's a lot of comments!

posted by mariposa75 on April 12, 2009 at 9:59 PM | link to this | reply

So sorry...
to hear you weren't well. I haven't been on much myself lately.  As usual, LOVE your stuff.  Beautiful...

posted by JDM1991 on March 22, 2009 at 1:36 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Ash
Enjoy your horse-time :)! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on March 16, 2009 at 10:24 AM | link to this | reply

wow..that's a cool one.....

posted by Star5_ on March 1, 2009 at 6:42 AM | link to this | reply

Yep! You are still posting! Great news!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on February 27, 2009 at 9:38 PM | link to this | reply

What a vivacious transition!

posted by Straightforward on February 27, 2009 at 5:32 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kolekshuns
Wherever do you find those happy faces....they are awesome...Thank you so much!

posted by Wigopa_ on February 26, 2009 at 10:41 PM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS
I missed you all very much..I am happy that you liked this one...Thank you!

posted by Wigopa_ on February 26, 2009 at 10:41 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Ash
I am so glad you enjoyed...Yes there are interesting pleasures to be had by all three...I hope to enjoy them to the fullest...Thanks my friend!

posted by Wigopa_ on February 26, 2009 at 10:40 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome
I am so glad you enjoyed....I had my dad help me with this...I had it in my head, but with a 102 fever, it was a little cloudy, so after I wrote it, he came back and asked, "are you sure?
you might want to check this out more when you are feeling better." I did and he was right...I had all sorts of craziness with this one...I am just glad it worked out...Thank you so much my friend...I think I am on the mend...

posted by Wigopa_ on February 26, 2009 at 10:39 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu and WileyJohn
I missed you and Wiley...I am glad you enjoyed...Thank you both!

posted by Wigopa_ on February 26, 2009 at 10:35 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Elinjo
Thanks much...I to hope that I feel better soon...

posted by Wigopa_ on February 26, 2009 at 10:34 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Rockingrector
Glad to know I am not alone...Thanks for dropping in!

posted by Wigopa_ on February 26, 2009 at 10:33 PM | link to this | reply

Re: BC-A
Thank you tons my friend!

posted by Wigopa_ on February 26, 2009 at 10:32 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Troosha
I totally agree....The sparkle in one's eye...should tell all about their true self...I would to hear more about the purple hat! Thank you so much!

posted by Wigopa_ on February 26, 2009 at 10:32 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Mariaki
I am so happy you enjoyed...thank you so much!

posted by Wigopa_ on February 26, 2009 at 10:30 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam444
Thank you for the well wishes...I wouldn't have wished this bug on anyone...

posted by Wigopa_ on February 26, 2009 at 10:29 PM | link to this | reply

Re: drohan254
Thank you so much..glad you enjoyed..

posted by Wigopa_ on February 26, 2009 at 10:28 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Yellowrose55
Yes time does sure speed by...Thank you for the great comments!

posted by Wigopa_ on February 26, 2009 at 10:28 PM | link to this | reply

Fantastic!
As always!Bravo!

posted by Kolekshuns on February 26, 2009 at 7:43 AM | link to this | reply

This is great.  I missed you and wondered where you had gone.

posted by TAPS. on February 25, 2009 at 8:11 PM | link to this | reply

wiccan she wolf
What a marvelous poetic journey down the years luv and it's great to have you back recovered from the flu luv....

posted by WileyJohn on February 25, 2009 at 7:53 PM | link to this | reply

Nicely done..each phase has it's unique pleasures..enjoy 'em all! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on February 25, 2009 at 6:07 PM | link to this | reply

Just beautiful Marion... Loved the sequence of reflections and the play like format of the poem... I could see your character changing before her mirror... I just loved the way you used the brading as the unifying action...  at the end I  felt like standing, clapping and yelling Bravo!  Bravo!  Hope you are feeling better sweetie...  xoxo

posted by Sinome on February 25, 2009 at 3:47 PM | link to this | reply

So glad to see you back and hope your on the mend. Love this by the way

posted by Kabu on February 25, 2009 at 3:10 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful to live long enough to be a granny and see one's daughter and granddaughter coping well!

I really like this poem. I hope you'll soon be over the 'flu!

posted by elinjo on February 25, 2009 at 12:13 PM | link to this | reply

Know the feeling (girl, mother, grandmother...)

posted by Rockingrector_retd on February 25, 2009 at 8:40 AM | link to this | reply

  … to legend and poetized by you love. BCA, Bill*s Cae

posted by BC-A on February 25, 2009 at 8:28 AM | link to this | reply

 

posted by BC-A on February 25, 2009 at 8:27 AM | link to this | reply

Although the exterior may change I think the sparkle in the eye remains the same.  I loved the poem, Wiccan!  Not yet posted I wrote a poem similar in theme and it makes reference to sporting the purple hat!  Yup… we may look different but there’s new and slightly bolder woman looking in that mirror.   Glad to hear you're feeling better! 

posted by Troosha on February 25, 2009 at 6:07 AM | link to this | reply

Superb my friend!
a most eloquent tale of the passing of time; very well done indeed; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on February 25, 2009 at 4:53 AM | link to this | reply

Sorry to hear about the flu! Stay well! lol sam

posted by sam444 on February 25, 2009 at 4:03 AM | link to this | reply

wow wiccan ..the mirrors know more than any others about secrets of the woman ..amazingly touchingly written ..enjoyed it

posted by drohan254 on February 25, 2009 at 3:44 AM | link to this | reply

Time as the saying goes "in the blink of an eye" is gone. Your "Braids of Time" reflect an inner glow....moving and delicate.

posted by yellowrose55 on February 24, 2009 at 11:41 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Scotcanada
Thank you for the kind words of praise....You have humbled me...

posted by Wigopa_ on February 24, 2009 at 11:21 PM | link to this | reply

Marion

This is the kind of poem I wish i could write.

Your poem is so tightly worded and yet so fully fleshed. Great work.

Glad you liked my little granson rhyme.

posted by scotcanada on February 24, 2009 at 11:04 PM | link to this | reply

Re:
Thank you Merkie...I missed this place...but I think I missed you and my other friends more...

posted by Wigopa_ on February 24, 2009 at 10:44 PM | link to this | reply

Hey Marion welcome back. I love this reflective write .I can relate to all the phases you edify!True to life!

posted by merkie on February 24, 2009 at 10:40 PM | link to this | reply