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reminds me of my youngest daughter
who fears neither frog or creepy crawlie and laughs herself to sleep. This piece reminds me of joy. I loved it.

posted by shanna63437 on February 21, 2009 at 8:31 PM | link to this | reply

scot, sounds like a typical grandson, or son..."He'll sleep when he's old."
Lol, how true...:)

posted by Rumor on February 21, 2009 at 11:29 AM | link to this | reply

Well done... your writing is an amazing gift to the reader!!! thanks

posted by Itza on February 18, 2009 at 12:07 PM | link to this | reply

I stopped in for another read! This is so charming! sam

posted by sam444 on February 18, 2009 at 8:10 AM | link to this | reply

This reads...My Grandson....How Could you? Quite creative!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on February 17, 2009 at 11:37 AM | link to this | reply

Grandsons are such wonderful children. make you burst with Pride!

posted by merkie on February 17, 2009 at 9:49 AM | link to this | reply

Scot
He’ll sleep when he’s old” –   Oh, how we want our grandchildren to just embrace life and run with it – and to be a child for as long as they can.  

posted by Troosha on February 17, 2009 at 8:39 AM | link to this | reply

sounds like both my grandsons...lol..awesome !

posted by hazel_st_cricket on February 17, 2009 at 4:01 AM | link to this | reply

I like the sounds and i like haiku too. So, very good indeed! Harpo47

posted by Harpo47 on February 17, 2009 at 3:20 AM | link to this | reply

I loved these! Too cool! I hope he has kids too! lol sam

posted by sam444 on February 17, 2009 at 1:28 AM | link to this | reply

cute
The future, that is what our grandchildren are.

posted by Hackthorne19 on February 17, 2009 at 1:13 AM | link to this | reply

Indeed, happiness is being a grandparent. Sounds grand for a reason:

GRAND Parent! Amen

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posted by ILLUMINATI8 on February 17, 2009 at 1:12 AM | link to this | reply