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This is one haunted crazy house.....and one creatively frightening tale.

posted by yellowrose55 on February 25, 2009 at 12:43 AM | link to this | reply

excellent! Very creative! This leaves me wanting to hear more of the story.Tomorrow???

posted by merkie on February 17, 2009 at 9:48 AM | link to this | reply

THANKS for visiting and I am waiting form more verse.

posted by Kabu on February 15, 2009 at 7:17 PM | link to this | reply

very fluid

posted by MiaElla on February 14, 2009 at 4:01 PM | link to this | reply

I've been browsing through here. Great work
and yes I went to Ardrossan in Scotland once, found it sort of a depressing place, the Ardrossan in South Australia although much smaller, is also a rather depressing sort of place.

posted by Kabu on February 14, 2009 at 9:45 AM | link to this | reply

Can't wait to hear what those 'other things worse than death' were! Great tale.

posted by Rockingrector_retd on February 14, 2009 at 8:27 AM | link to this | reply

Scot
I'm lovin' it..... 

posted by Troosha on February 14, 2009 at 8:17 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderful stories in poetry!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on February 13, 2009 at 9:15 PM | link to this | reply

wow there. this is very well-crafted poetry/tale. it is certainly not simple to tell tales completely in rhyme, but you have managed to do so with entertainment value as well. awesome. i will read the rest some time and look forward to seeing more

posted by Luz_Briar on February 13, 2009 at 8:28 PM | link to this | reply

lovely way to discuss a chilling subject. Very creative, indeed !

posted by hazel_st_cricket on February 13, 2009 at 5:25 PM | link to this | reply

posted by drohan254 on February 13, 2009 at 5:09 PM | link to this | reply