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Very good
I like this very much. A certain sadness at lost things.
I want to thank you for your kind words on http://http://www.blogit.com/Blogs/Blog.aspx/Unsaid/
I did put the question to the mentor that i did not really regard them as poems, especially against
all the wonderful poetry that is about. He said: what is poetry? Anyway, it's great to be able to consider the possibilities of your work.
posted by
Azur
on February 14, 2009 at 1:45 PM
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Meeting someone you know after such a tumultous ride would make me very comfortable. Well done.
posted by
hardilaziz
on February 12, 2009 at 10:12 PM
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hey my nbsp
posted by
Star5_
on February 12, 2009 at 8:47 PM
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Lessons learnt!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on February 12, 2009 at 8:27 PM
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Wow. Very impressive. The speaker has gained lots of wisdom.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 12, 2009 at 4:54 PM
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your normal breathtaking words. You spoil us so.
posted by
Kabu
on February 12, 2009 at 2:31 PM
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hang in there
posted by
Lanetay
on February 12, 2009 at 1:41 PM
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beautiful, Sinome, beautiful. xxoo
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on February 12, 2009 at 7:28 AM
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posted by
lestate7
on February 12, 2009 at 7:20 AM
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Such reserved anticipation! I adored white capped hills! So exquisite! Love you sweetie! sammy xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on February 12, 2009 at 7:02 AM
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I so love the imagery in this my dear Sinome
an excellent poem in every way; perfect my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on February 12, 2009 at 4:48 AM
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I agree with BetsyLewis; the sentence really struck me. God bless. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on February 12, 2009 at 4:17 AM
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I love "the chilly arms of sadness wrapping around" - that is a wonderful sentence. Thank you.
posted by
BetsyLewis
on February 12, 2009 at 3:17 AM
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Very, very beautiful...
posted by
Chilitree
on February 12, 2009 at 2:45 AM
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still, collected waters can run so deep, can't they. expertly done
posted by
bythewindowsill
on February 11, 2009 at 10:50 PM
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I understand this sentiment...Yes, there are times when we must stand and face it..Not by choice, just because we have too...Superb post Marta!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 11, 2009 at 10:40 PM
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wow........love is on air, and sure love hurt for incubus......
posted by
Star5_
on February 11, 2009 at 10:06 PM
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Sinome
I know now what you will not do ..
posted by
drohan254
on February 11, 2009 at 10:01 PM
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You are your own person now.
Lovely, wistful poem.
posted by
scotcanada
on February 11, 2009 at 9:59 PM
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