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Passionately Powerful.....the heart laid open. Every line piercing.
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yellowrose55
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February 4, 2009
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2 Thumbs up!
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Texas_Gem
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February 4, 2009
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You are just too good
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skye08
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February 4, 2009
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Sinome
Yup... that got me alright.... How can one not be touched by such an out-pouring of raw emotion.
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Troosha
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February 4, 2009
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Rich in imagery and emotions. What a sensational ending. Wow!
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hardilaziz
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February 4, 2009
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Simply superb...words fail me! Thanks for commenting on my post---I'm glad you liked the story.....watch out for more "forwards"! God bless. Nita.
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snowview
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February 4, 2009
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Stupendous write Sinome
has it all; imagery, emotion, hope, dejection; a brilliant depiction my friend; many blessings and thanks
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mariaki
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February 4, 2009
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Nice description
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lustorlove
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February 3, 2009
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And Oh, thank you for your smile. Kep smiling. Always
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Bhaskar.ing
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February 3, 2009
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This,my princess Marta, is so sweet, so lovingly expressed, such vivid imagery that it has touched me very deeply
for though I will never love again, I do not want to be alone.
So come my friend, lets dance. Please be assured and convinced from you desert prince xoxoxo
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Bhaskar.ing
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February 3, 2009
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always have something to learn from you....
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9STAR
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February 3, 2009
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My eyes teared as I neared the end of this...I agree it has many qualities of the Native Americans, though at the same time it has such heartfelt, emotion, that your words ring so true! A HUGE KUDOS for this one!!!!!
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February 3, 2009
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Outstanding imagery! It is the Sacred Hoop of the Lakota! Your poem encompasses the four directions of the universe! It is part of a poem I am writing now, and it has etchings in the earth and the red orb! You imagery is ongoing! The convincing is in the experience for me! BRAVO SWEETIE!!!!!! sammy
xoxoxo
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sam444
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February 3, 2009
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Beautiful poem. So much vulnerability.
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FormerStudentIntern
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February 3, 2009
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Such beautiful writing
I know this feeling well!
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calia14
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February 3, 2009
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Interesting sentiments!
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Soul_Builder101
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February 3, 2009
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