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Yes...the rain and sunshine are best when taken in "together" as "one" through it all.

posted by yellowrose55 on January 24, 2009 at 11:44 PM | link to this | reply

I love the mountain and the sky.

posted by Tiddlypush on January 24, 2009 at 11:10 AM | link to this | reply

Your words are like cotton candy and very tasty.  Have a great day

posted by Smittenheimer on January 23, 2009 at 11:44 AM | link to this | reply

Quiet a proposal to open arms to all that is good and existent, and I'm drawn into its sanctity simultaneously: ok, I'm not going to cry while resting my head in your fragrant breasts, but that doesn't mean I'm not wondering where you are placing yours--which seems to claim some meataphysical intention. This is why I like this piece because its a 2-way road, while simply presenting the first dimension, it implies much more, and it's about time you rose from the dead!

posted by jfm32 on January 22, 2009 at 6:00 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Now if that’s not an offering or commitment of “together”, I dunno what is?!?   

posted by Troosha on January 22, 2009 at 11:45 AM | link to this | reply

Most beautiful . A pleasure to read and join in the depths of minds!

posted by merkie on January 22, 2009 at 10:23 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Wonderful as usual, however do you keep this beauty flowing luv.

posted by WileyJohn on January 21, 2009 at 10:21 PM | link to this | reply

"My heart will reach out to yours,   your pain will dissolve in mine",  has a profund meaning for me. Fantastic! my princess of the ocean kissed sands. xoxoxo -:)

posted by Bhaskar.ing on January 21, 2009 at 9:04 PM | link to this | reply

I adore exploring the depths of the mind! Hi sweetie, all my love to you! sammy  xoxo

posted by sam444 on January 21, 2009 at 8:47 PM | link to this | reply

Such a wonderful time when relationships reach that level of openness.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 21, 2009 at 7:17 PM | link to this | reply

This is like a balm for the soul...very enchanting work Sinome! Un testament à un excellent poetess

posted by Wigopa_ on January 21, 2009 at 6:58 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely to see, that there is still romance. If not in real life, then at least in poety which is even better, because poetry is pain-free.

posted by vogue on January 21, 2009 at 2:51 PM | link to this | reply

very nice poem

posted by Lanetay on January 21, 2009 at 1:31 PM | link to this | reply

I love that there is such connection, purity, and unity in your love poems!

posted by gypsypoet1975 on January 21, 2009 at 11:06 AM | link to this | reply

Soothing indeed ...

posted by afzal50 on January 21, 2009 at 9:05 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderful!
You have a beautiful view on romance and love   Thank you for sharing it

posted by lionreign on January 21, 2009 at 8:56 AM | link to this | reply

Very beautiful! God bless. Nita.

posted by Nita09 on January 21, 2009 at 8:20 AM | link to this | reply

QUITE AN INVITATION, VERY NICE, THANKS , KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on January 21, 2009 at 6:56 AM | link to this | reply

Great poem on mutual love and trust. Reminds me of a popular film song which when translated reads:

"When someone breaks your heart

and leaves you in pain

Then come to me my dear,

my door is open and

shall remain open for you"- Indeevar


posted by hardilaziz on January 21, 2009 at 6:22 AM | link to this | reply

Beautifully written Sinome
the dream of past present and future merging into something deep and wonderful; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on January 21, 2009 at 5:11 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful
  BlingsMemories of the thought of love.  A beautiful escape and a nice memory but not a love of the heart. It was a beautiful memory of stolen moments of "love" on the beach to be brought out and dusted off occasionally but a reminder that while enjoyable not the true love your soul longed for.  





posted by skye08 on January 20, 2009 at 10:33 PM | link to this | reply