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posted by
Itza
on January 20, 2009 at 5:48 PM
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Very nice poem! I enjoyued the cadence too! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 20, 2009 at 4:55 AM
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Bringing back memories of youth
raking the leaves in a pile and a run and a big jump into the middle. then a shower of leaves to be raked again. great poem and fond memories.
posted by
skye08
on January 20, 2009 at 3:21 AM
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I love Fall. Not many poems really do it justice. A poem about autumn needs to knock your socks off. This one did make me smile remembering my favorite season.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 20, 2009 at 1:15 AM
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WOW! I see talent here...and intelligence! You will get right up there in blogit. I see it already!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 19, 2009 at 10:28 PM
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Excellent use of rhyme and meter...
...and I love the subject matter...autumn leaves.
posted by
metalrat
on January 19, 2009 at 10:03 PM
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You paint a beautiful picture, with a great choice of words! Thanks too for stopping by! God bless. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on January 19, 2009 at 9:58 PM
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Fantastic Poem
Love your writing.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on January 19, 2009 at 6:39 PM
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