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Great poetry, We all have dreams in our lives, and no matter what we should not give up keep thriving and working towards it. For in the long haul it will all pay off for in one direction or another
posted by
serpico
on January 20, 2009 at 9:27 AM
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Your poem shows creativity. It’s absolutely awesome! BCA, Bill*s Ca
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posted by
BC-A
on January 16, 2009 at 10:07 AM
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Santa Fe...Albuquerque...Amarillo...very cool work indeed!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 15, 2009 at 11:21 PM
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Very accurate. My jeans attest to it!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 15, 2009 at 11:08 PM
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Exquisite imagery and E.T.A. for a close was superb! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 15, 2009 at 10:12 PM
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Great !
I love the first line, how great!
The second stanza invokes a cretain atmosphere, you can just see the different characters...A wonderfu creation all along, well done! J.
posted by
Jimsego
on January 15, 2009 at 9:39 AM
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RenSpur
Clever poem - I enjoyed the anology of life's journey and a bus trip. And, of course, there's no ETA.....
posted by
Troosha
on January 15, 2009 at 8:03 AM
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Excellent Thought and very well expressed
I really like your work.
posted by
skye08
on January 15, 2009 at 7:53 AM
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Glenn ~.~
This is a great write...rich with wonderful imagery -- great concept, too -- nicely executed. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on January 15, 2009 at 6:32 AM
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really like this poem a lot...
well written...kudos to you !
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on January 15, 2009 at 5:47 AM
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