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a fairy tale!!!!

posted by Star5_ on January 14, 2009 at 6:29 AM | link to this | reply

This is great, Wigopa.  I read it several times and each time it just got better. 

posted by TAPS. on January 10, 2009 at 12:47 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent poem!

posted by muley12 on January 10, 2009 at 10:55 AM | link to this | reply

This is terrific, I love it. And it expresses so neatly what I feel about my wedding couples. Thank you.

posted by Rockingrector_retd on January 10, 2009 at 9:20 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Hardilaziz
Thank you so much for the great comment!

posted by Wigopa_ on January 10, 2009 at 12:32 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Soul_Builder101
Thank you so much Dave!

posted by Wigopa_ on January 10, 2009 at 12:31 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Teddypoet
Thank you so much!

posted by Wigopa_ on January 10, 2009 at 12:30 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Calia14
Thank you!

posted by Wigopa_ on January 10, 2009 at 12:28 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kolekshuns
Hope this keeps you warm with all that snow coming.. Thank you!

posted by Wigopa_ on January 10, 2009 at 12:25 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Merkie
Yes, the warm of the summer is a great time for all..Thank you!

posted by Wigopa_ on January 10, 2009 at 12:24 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam444
Yes it can last through the ages...Thank you Sam!

posted by Wigopa_ on January 10, 2009 at 12:20 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome
Thank  you so much! I wrote this actually for a friend of mine, I just thought I would post here to see what others thought of it..Thanks again!

posted by Wigopa_ on January 10, 2009 at 12:17 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Ash
Hope you have fun...The Salsa lessons are going great...I should be in top form soon..  Thank you!

posted by Wigopa_ on January 10, 2009 at 12:15 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Hazel
Thank you so much! Great to have you back!

posted by Wigopa_ on January 10, 2009 at 12:14 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Chris (Scramble)
Thank you so much!

posted by Wigopa_ on January 10, 2009 at 12:13 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Mneme
Thank you...Very nice to meet you..

posted by Wigopa_ on January 10, 2009 at 12:12 AM | link to this | reply

Classic love story narrated with panache.

posted by hardilaziz on January 9, 2009 at 11:34 PM | link to this | reply

Who knows the wheel of karma? Lovely remembrance!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on January 9, 2009 at 10:40 PM | link to this | reply

Stunning indeed...very well done, Marion!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on January 9, 2009 at 10:34 PM | link to this | reply

MMmm
Summer love, beautifully expressed here!

posted by calia14 on January 9, 2009 at 10:25 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely!
 Just the kind of poem we need about now.  They are predicting snow tonight.

 High FiveVery Nice.


posted by Kolekshuns on January 9, 2009 at 7:42 PM | link to this | reply

The warmth of the summer may fade but it is wonderful and exciting while in lovers share the season.

posted by merkie on January 9, 2009 at 6:24 PM | link to this | reply

A summer love is a memory that can last through the ages! sam

posted by sam444 on January 9, 2009 at 5:03 PM | link to this | reply

Very beautiful Marion... Summer loves are usually the best... but they rarely last :-( .  Sometimes is just a fizzle... a spark that grows into a fire opnly to be put out by the Autumn rains... There always will be summers and loves and Autumn rains... won't it?  I think so... Again gorgeous poem :-)

posted by Sinome on January 9, 2009 at 4:25 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely, Marion!...
I'm going dancing tonight after several weeks...how's ur salsa coming?...keep enjoying! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on January 9, 2009 at 2:48 PM | link to this | reply

SOooooo very beautiful. Love it !

posted by hazel_st_cricket on January 9, 2009 at 2:31 PM | link to this | reply

Simply Wonderfull wigopa! Chris.

posted by Scramble on January 9, 2009 at 2:01 PM | link to this | reply

This is so warmhearted, very nice.

posted by mneme on January 9, 2009 at 1:51 PM | link to this | reply