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You describe Nature really well.
posted by
hardilaziz
on January 6, 2009 at 9:39 AM
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thank you sinome......
posted by
Star5_
on January 6, 2009 at 8:23 AM
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I am in awe of the images you have shown me...WOW...this is stunning work!! A true master class in imagery!
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 5, 2009 at 11:55 PM
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As if the rain has washed away all the sadness... and a smile found. The images unfolding in your poetry are always awesome.
posted by
yellowrose55
on January 5, 2009 at 10:27 PM
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Sinome
"........the rain that Nature seems sometimes to gift the South in lieu of snow....."
I want some of that rain and warmth luv, alright I'll just have to get that from your beautiful mind on the page.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 5, 2009 at 9:32 PM
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I smile with you! Astonishing imagery once again! I love it to bits! sammy xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on January 5, 2009 at 9:26 PM
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I love the rain and of course purple is my favorite color
posted by
Lanetay
on January 5, 2009 at 8:31 PM
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Sinome
How this reminds me of lovely warm summer rains, when a mist-shrouded sun makes us think of magic...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 5, 2009 at 8:27 PM
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Yes, there are these quiet indicators of equilibrium in the world...
posted by
Straightforward
on January 5, 2009 at 8:26 PM
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I so understand the need to write this beautiful poem. So many times in
my life I have just had to walk and walk and walk. It does help.
posted by
Kabu
on January 5, 2009 at 8:08 PM
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Excellent poem. I feel like I am there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 5, 2009 at 5:41 PM
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You have painted quite a picture for us with your words.
It is like you take me there.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 5, 2009 at 3:49 PM
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amazing walk to follow with you. Your imagery is consistently clear and feelings emerge form the lines toa moist embrace of reader too. I read and smile.
posted by
merkie
on January 5, 2009 at 3:45 PM
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Unbelievably beautiful!
The imagery in this piece is so vivid and alive! Thank you for sharing your soul with us!
posted by
LadyGhost1970
on January 5, 2009 at 2:57 PM
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This is a great appreciation of nature, elegantly expressed.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on January 5, 2009 at 1:12 PM
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WOW!
Beautiful...Vivid...Fluid! Thanks!!~
posted by
Texas_Gem
on January 5, 2009 at 10:59 AM
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Sinome ~.~
Such beautiful words and exquisite imagery in this soothing piece of quiet resolve. Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on January 5, 2009 at 10:14 AM
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Beautiful and picturesque !!!
posted by
afzal50
on January 5, 2009 at 10:09 AM
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A LOVELY WALK AND TIME WITH NATURE HAS A HEALING EFFECT ON US, THANKS FOR SHARING THIS, AND IT IS GREAT TO SEE YOU SMILE, THANKS, KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on January 5, 2009 at 9:22 AM
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It was a wonderful walk and
I loved the movie as we walked. It is wonderful how water can wash away all the pain. Have a happy day. skye
posted by
skye08
on January 5, 2009 at 8:14 AM
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You've painted a beautiful picture! I love reading your poems. God bless. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on January 5, 2009 at 8:13 AM
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Sinome
Although sometimes a walk in the rain begins as an attempt at avoidance or just some time to be “nothing” or something other than ourselves, it inevitable nourishes and brings us back to who we are – flawed and beautiful. I loved taking this walk with you….
posted by
Troosha
on January 5, 2009 at 7:58 AM
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