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This is a wonderfully woven dream.
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hardilaziz
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January 5, 2009
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This is Beautifull Sinome! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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January 4, 2009
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Master Piece of you. A vision,a dream bringing on forming my world and soul
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Mystereo
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January 4, 2009
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Very pretty!!!
posted by
9STAR
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January 4, 2009
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yes there is a certian time of night that seems to be our coccon...You have captured it so well....Hope all is well in your neck of the woods..
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Wigopa_
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January 4, 2009
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As usual, your gift for composition and bringing the reader into your experience. Especially liked 1st part..."touch I never felt/scent of hair/ kiss I never had..."
As your thought turned into the You, had some probs relating, probably because I don't have one close enough in time. So while the 1st part stirred my memories, I began to feel a little off-point, but that's because some memories seem to be eternal (ok, I'm still working on it), and things seem to be fine if I can keep that distance and not fall into it. That was yesterday.
Today I'm doing another read, and would like to note something else I was feeling, then--that the You is somehow nondescritp as a person and/or a memory, and seems to have a vaguer, transcendent/translucent quality--which fits quite well into the love-being "you never had" in the 1st part. And I begin to wonder if the poem does not have some mystical quality, for what is this YOU you seem to turn to? Is this the preparation of a soul's ascent? I wonder.
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jfm32
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January 4, 2009
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Sinome
Again and again, beautifully composed.In my life, after long years and painful waiting in solitude, there was a 'you', and she is Kabu.
posted by
WileyJohn
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January 3, 2009
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Wonderful imagery! Hey sweetie I got your email and will get back to you soon! Lots to tell you! I am battling another migraine! Ugh! Love you! sammy xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
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January 3, 2009
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Wonderful. So many people go through this between relationships or if they've never had one.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
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January 3, 2009
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Kind of an inner struggle going on – though enjoying this time of night an emptiness creeps in to ruin the that soft moment when you
sense the earth begin to slow its turning.
So I am left with both a sense of resolve but also a looming sadness. Arousing emotion is definitely your “thing”, Sinome.
posted by
Troosha
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January 3, 2009
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Amazing thoughts sinome! Comforting
posted by
merkie
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January 3, 2009
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Beautiful, Sinome! ~.~
One finds such comfort in thinking of love (even when the source is absent.) Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
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January 3, 2009
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Awesome!
Couldn't have said it better myself.
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Kolekshuns
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January 3, 2009
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thank goodness for the "yous" we have, or will yet find, to complete our
worlds..
..(I'm reminded of that song "Then Came You" - I have no idea who sings it..lol)...
..
posted by
Rumor
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January 3, 2009
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Beautifully written
beautiful thoughts
posted by
skye08
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January 3, 2009
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Beautiful
and there is a 'you', out there somewhere; never stop believing...
posted by
malcolm
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January 3, 2009
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Your poems are so beautiful and touching, in their thoughts and choice of words, that I am always at a loss of words to respond to them. Hope the year has started well for you. God bless. Nita.
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snowview
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January 3, 2009
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