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You have to pull the wool i did not know what to think, delightful!

posted by Mystereo on January 1, 2009 at 2:54 PM | link to this | reply

This gave me goosebumps!  Thank you so much for sharing this!

posted by RASSE on December 30, 2008 at 6:35 PM | link to this | reply

Incredible imagery!
You are an amazingly talented poet! Thank you for a lovely read. 

posted by LadyGhost1970 on December 30, 2008 at 12:19 PM | link to this | reply

What an awesome refrain and poignant close! sam

posted by sam444 on December 25, 2008 at 8:20 PM | link to this | reply

very inspiring and the style unique

posted by mysteria on December 23, 2008 at 9:00 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful as always!!!!!!!! luv yeah and happy holidays!!!!!!

posted by Star5_ on December 23, 2008 at 6:25 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful work

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on December 23, 2008 at 5:13 AM | link to this | reply

Deep and meaningful work!
 

posted by Katray2 on December 22, 2008 at 11:02 AM | link to this | reply

Well done! many points to ponder.

posted by merkie on December 22, 2008 at 9:01 AM | link to this | reply

The simile's are simply so accurate

posted by Straightforward on December 22, 2008 at 8:01 AM | link to this | reply

Exquisite piece my friend
fine imagery and very well written; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on December 22, 2008 at 6:54 AM | link to this | reply

interesting
I love the style and it has left me with a very clear image...  I love the inherent metaphor of it  - it's making me think (it seems to be a day for it)

posted by lionreign on December 22, 2008 at 6:36 AM | link to this | reply

VERY NICELY WRITTEN, THANKS, KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on December 22, 2008 at 6:33 AM | link to this | reply