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very nice....
posted by
Star5_
on January 12, 2009 at 7:51 PM
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This is a master piece for the New Year moves as the winter sleep.
I'm not going to post for a while but, I'm still read. I want to share Secret Admirer last poem on the 4th page. Thank you.
posted by
Mystereo
on January 1, 2009 at 5:02 PM
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posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on December 24, 2008 at 8:35 PM
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posted by
RomaKay
on December 17, 2008 at 7:28 PM
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Brick
I really liked:
The ground is fragile as a china doll. It really feels like that on a cold, crisp, winter day - doesn't it?
posted by
Troosha
on December 16, 2008 at 11:22 AM
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Great simile and your rhyme sets up fantastic cadence! It is a very cool, no pun intended, lol poem with exquisite imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 15, 2008 at 9:19 PM
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