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LOL Teddy,

Thanks. Um, yeah, she takes up a lot of my time but I have a few brewing in my brain. Hope to get them typed up before they're gone! Thanks for reading this!

posted by SpitFire70 on January 4, 2009 at 5:52 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful, my friend...I thought that I had commented on this long ago...

 my apologies for the late comment on such grand words...I know she is pleased. Are you going to write more or is the young Lady getting the best of her old Mum?

posted by _teddypoet_ on January 4, 2009 at 1:38 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you so very much, Mystereo

posted by SpitFire70 on December 15, 2008 at 8:30 PM | link to this | reply

Awsome! Diamonds for shinning of honor in words form for a mother.

I truely thank you for this read, I write about my mother often too. Mystereo.

posted by Mystereo on December 15, 2008 at 7:05 PM | link to this | reply

calia 14,

Thank you very much. Thanks for reading this.

posted by SpitFire70 on November 29, 2008 at 7:19 PM | link to this | reply

Very moving piece, I'm sorry for your loss.   

posted by calia14 on November 29, 2008 at 9:44 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Katray

posted by SpitFire70 on November 26, 2008 at 6:00 PM | link to this | reply

So poignant and touching, Dear Spitfire..

posted by PoetRaye on November 26, 2008 at 5:56 PM | link to this | reply

Oh, thanks, Lovelylady!!

So sweet of you

posted by SpitFire70 on November 19, 2008 at 5:08 PM | link to this | reply

posted by lovelyladymonk on November 19, 2008 at 2:33 PM | link to this | reply

Aww, merkie,

I know. I'm sorry to hear that. It's never easy, is it?

posted by SpitFire70 on November 16, 2008 at 5:15 PM | link to this | reply

Moms leave an empty hole in your heart when they are gone. Its almost 20 years and I still miss my Mom.

posted by merkie on November 13, 2008 at 10:38 AM | link to this | reply

Ex Turpi,

I'm so sorry for your loss and I agree. It's never easy, especially when you were so close to the one you lost.

posted by SpitFire70 on November 12, 2008 at 6:13 PM | link to this | reply

Wow, Sam...

That really means so much! Thank you!

posted by SpitFire70 on November 12, 2008 at 6:00 PM | link to this | reply

I know what mothers mean; I know how you feel. I lost mine long ago, too long ago. The pain never ebbs.

posted by EX_TURPI on November 11, 2008 at 2:18 PM | link to this | reply

Oh my, how wonderful of a tribute. I was so taken with this line: There’s only so much sadness my essence can take It means so much more now I have finished the poem. This is magnificent! sam

posted by sam444 on November 10, 2008 at 8:34 PM | link to this | reply

Sir Strat,

Thank you, my friend.

posted by SpitFire70 on November 10, 2008 at 12:44 PM | link to this | reply

BC-A,

Thank you. I hope you don't feel them "personally" tho!

posted by SpitFire70 on November 10, 2008 at 12:44 PM | link to this | reply

demultiflex,

Thank you so much for your words.

posted by SpitFire70 on November 10, 2008 at 12:43 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks 9star

posted by SpitFire70 on November 10, 2008 at 12:42 PM | link to this | reply

posted by strat on November 10, 2008 at 8:39 AM | link to this | reply

 I feel your words*

posted by BC-A on November 10, 2008 at 8:09 AM | link to this | reply

Heart moving piece

As humans our parents are our prize possession. I feel for you, and I'm sorry about your mother. May you find comfort in another. Though, I know there is no substitute.      

posted by demultiflex on November 10, 2008 at 3:13 AM | link to this | reply

very good

posted by 9STAR on November 9, 2008 at 8:52 PM | link to this | reply