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Great poem Lotus... I guess it is a decission only you can make ... I do not envy you though... Good luck :-)
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Sinome
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October 16, 2008
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another great poem about being torn

posted by
Luz_Briar
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October 16, 2008
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Your poem strikes me like awesome and so personal that the language allows me to feel your conflivt love*** w/TLC, BCA *** Bill*s Wa
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BC-A
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October 16, 2008
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Believe me my friend I have been there.........
I believe I made the only decision possible - to break my own heart for which I am responsible; very well done; many blessings, thanks and good luck
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mariaki
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October 16, 2008
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posted by
_teddypoet_
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October 15, 2008
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Congratulations! This is awesome! I love it to pieces. Sterling imagery! The close is just perfect! sam
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sam444
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October 15, 2008
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Wishing you health and happiness
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Smittenheimer
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October 15, 2008
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Choose the path of greater goodness and most heart
That little voice inside, listen to it and remember it is awfully soft..
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mysteria
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October 15, 2008
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SINCE YOU ASKED, IF IT WERE ME, I WOULD BREAK MY OWN, ON MY OWN HEART I CAN WORK TO MEND , BUT I HAVE NO POWER TO DO SO FOR ANOTHER, THANKS KENT
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Riversidepoet
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October 15, 2008
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Every desicion ...
... have consequences whether it's written in the stars or we write it ourselves in our diary - is there difference between the ego and the heart ... even if you know, maybe you don't want to know but ... it's ourself to decide which colour we try to create for the day tomorrow -
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
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October 15, 2008
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Take care with your decison...
posted by
_Symphony_
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October 15, 2008
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Hard question ! Take care..
posted by
merkie
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October 15, 2008
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oh no!!!!!!!
I know I can't tell you what to do but I just came out of that kind of relationship. Please spare yourself the worst heartbreak ever!!!! Truth needs to win every time. It is not natural for people to live a lie and a lie breaks and crushes everything that is good ...
posted by
AnaEmiliaMarina
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October 15, 2008
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So passionate and so fine a question ...
posted by
afzal50
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October 15, 2008
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Great conflict, food for stories and novels an yet you have captured the essence in a single poem.
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vogue
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October 15, 2008
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